【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
! @  F3 W4 E) [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# A- W8 v/ f1 m* L- k7 GThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
" ~6 A  T/ ^- NI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
6 o# d7 M( K% c/ h4 g0 xLove… just the word love
( H4 F- A7 q, cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ q7 |) j8 U: }1 l, w0 N) SBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) o1 L- v3 h% u( E" h2 {If today isn’t too late,
9 I) `$ m& O6 D3 g/ ?7 ?, R2 ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ O8 o7 I' E  B. M+ gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 I* B3 m; \# M, n0 R9 ~4 QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 J1 R0 T* ?) d) r% R3 ~( q0 tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- V  W2 A& }5 K+ x+ H) NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 q% }: \8 J' O( Y% IIf today isn’t too late,
$ E& e1 y4 d% `) J, C: gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 ~  w3 y# E1 ?0 M* c! u3 hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; L8 T, F0 x1 u9 M$ m$ zCan I entrust it to you?
) H, ^, f4 I2 y- B. s4 n/ FEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
; ^$ V/ R2 f6 \5 E! G- {Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 R- U$ q& S0 A& N2 i5 O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 }' x% u0 F* E. V8 q5 @, e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 {; e- V. g2 Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; s; _! I/ e7 [2 `% V<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 c% R( c. c% f1 K<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 }3 d  S; M& i( T! D  e<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" z+ y: c& K5 P+ {$ Z% X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* u) y# r8 [6 M9 G$ R, H, `% ~  ?- |<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# ^' [1 \5 f7 \! n4 z5 w<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ v. O$ T1 a% y! B<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 a+ v1 R2 j" W- A' p2 s<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( D7 b/ b6 \+ F<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( E- z! I7 P4 p8 l1 g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 M: x% C* X3 z/ d( Z3 y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. s! f, A& O, g9 R2 F<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& n9 K* ?3 y1 O<P>But I never did </P>
' Y( B* y" L, o, {! p/ ]; F<P>但我不会 </P>
6 _4 u- E! y" }+ L+ _1 J/ d<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ \: B0 T2 h% R0 u0 V<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# Z7 H1 X+ V. B( C8 H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- ~$ _- z  K: c' E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, S& @" G& Y0 |1 [) q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  ]9 c. j) f( w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& l) r( _- s7 s% ]% Z, ^4 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' |/ h& I% m. x- O  L& h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 G1 ]0 K1 N9 `% T" S2 K2 R; Y$ d7 ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ w% O) \& O$ t. f" K& s9 k1 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 Y' g$ p; }1 }+ Y' V' m<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ p! Z4 T4 j4 F2 V% J6 g: U<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, i1 |% g. |! f+ B4 K<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>