【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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4 f' I0 t3 y! z/ v6 i: O; V我另将歌词附在此。
4 }6 m0 U* u' L; o7 T& rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* [$ S1 n  b# g) Q# SWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# [) m( r" l7 F! y' LI would probably know how you feel
! B. P- _" x+ R. x# J: _% sLove… just the word love
1 D3 Q0 m' x, s7 ?! F5 GWhy is it so difficult to express?
% G1 ?4 d5 {: ]9 C* @" T$ U- I# A' GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 B+ s% p' j; ~* h/ Q& [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. ^9 ~9 j1 k* h3 i$ v+ I9 L: [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 N" s% c+ K) {: k' v: Z2 q1 uCan I entrust it to you?
4 N: b2 y3 A. m6 Y+ V2 hEntrust my love within your heart
; w% r( q& M: c, T. LLove… just the word love
7 g" V5 K2 w9 w) v) [& {0 wWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ D7 Z, _* x  i2 M- i9 DI want to confess that I love you,
  I0 m# c4 @* i) xBut I never did
! ]7 t+ c4 @. {! w) G' ^, q- @" yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 a0 k2 d: d% Y; ~" x3 B6 sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 D* H! T: K( xEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 n1 T- ]4 L% ~! q9 }4 x/ d8 c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 b0 o$ O& n! I6 i# k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 Z. F! _+ l- d% k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ b8 r" w: M3 \5 ?6 A( {" ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( Q& f9 l& r% [9 `4 q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 q. \% e1 B* S# o<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' [( G$ y' v3 Y7 J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; f5 m7 Y/ j. p1 b" s2 N/ x! o5 y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: o4 |- ?# D1 s; D8 S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! ?9 X7 r1 a: K' n3 E; X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% \% x, {% S+ q$ ^7 U3 D<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& h, p# i+ o" R8 _9 p$ ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 V8 y% w0 j% [' n5 k! R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ c- I. f( O  N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 i4 q1 `* ?* Y: A4 l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 s' k+ I) @0 X  ?6 v- p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* i* S8 q3 G# d) F' W' Z) E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 ~) q" Y$ |5 M; a" Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: W1 e6 y+ a7 R8 [! z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' _. G) k9 V( i1 h- a5 b<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 R3 z- |7 H- o9 q7 H  r<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 o! W0 z; A$ r2 ]7 @4 P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 M( T* {9 k; ~0 A) d( C4 |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 h2 N+ a5 m3 |7 i& j$ f! D! m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 c; L$ ^3 g7 R* n- i<P>但我不会 </P>
& j4 Z: \* t" K3 V3 S8 Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  k* M1 A) a( ^<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 @3 U6 P. q9 o% @' p8 F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  L, U; D! {/ \4 i6 K3 Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 Q/ z' z% U4 i8 E, l2 p2 v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 ~7 Q, r: M% {: z  Z7 W' G, {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' G+ }" R$ S# q' n  _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( I2 |! u( B8 E5 @! X: d& f$ _9 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 p+ s9 ?3 l) p' E$ N) x' {6 ~* B 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 b$ e. q* w( Z" v/ f( v这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 B; k) `' ]8 V0 M" ^9 O7 Z$ M这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 q2 ^3 u2 }7 [# ^2 X<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>