【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. B, o0 G: {$ WThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" C9 e  o5 H% }9 b: KFrom the first moment we met,
  L  X  w/ ]( E" h' HI already loved you with all my heart
; \/ ~7 n+ @, }2 l0 @We meet and talk everyday,
9 F+ U" S) n8 V  a1 r% i$ tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
3 |) M5 B& C9 N1 g- VWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 r: w; M" {% q% s  V" r, MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; g& e, e* l' ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, z; o. @$ c1 JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! S6 s5 B0 A8 Q% L& @* s# R9 l# e8 r  oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 f( o9 C" `1 T, kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ [% O3 b. Y  x8 jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& Q  l# M) F* H& xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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1 ~5 z# |7 I- `/ v[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. c  ~" Y# [) Z5 G# ^2 M- W% ^2 g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( o7 L, u0 r! z( p9 x. u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: B& I% c- M. Q1 |# H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 J* O7 ^* s* ~6 t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 q7 H3 s: k- c" W: n<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' A2 ]( ]! ~$ y! _6 W2 A0 }9 q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& Q5 U/ }$ _7 y% Y& [: E: f+ f* t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 T5 e9 E% |1 z4 _" c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, I/ B/ E; c* `: L5 K2 `5 w2 f* q- s<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, z4 R2 K/ x! t# Z4 R4 ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 ~! t! `# ]$ b7 j( y( b) H<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' f8 _. U% w+ K1 X% d1 {4 t: k$ _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& ?0 u3 d) b9 @2 e7 R+ a. p4 C/ g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  G  @8 }9 F" n5 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# U- K  p/ ~4 h0 U1 y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* }5 d- e4 Y% Z/ _1 H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! Z1 K. \" a9 }2 |2 P$ i2 s<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 H  G) b" u, d6 p5 c# k<P>但我不会 </P>
3 m3 d$ V7 W' h2 [6 k* B( z& e0 d( z5 t) j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. R# i4 P. d% V( n/ x# E! s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" X' D3 ]+ p6 `0 V) X: F9 V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ K; L0 b2 R9 L; L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! P  v/ V5 o2 X& `: P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& K% f3 X, N7 s: g9 q: x" J1 v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" N  t) w# |5 E- }, E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' }' L2 m$ i0 B. \" H: b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 Q$ w3 a. Z% O5 e0 e; b 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( s! }& u1 l2 Z3 M: K, Q% Q: F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ [0 B) @. i) \$ Z1 q# }3 m8 |这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% F1 v$ Z& }$ ~6 d& Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# ?  h5 j! F6 X3 m( H$ c4 j9 p( Z5 o<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>