【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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5 ~& x  |! X! Q. I我另将歌词附在此。
" V+ B' A6 ?. p1 ?The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, K7 Y% P* d8 K, U' E/ qFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; X. p3 n; ~0 v& Z5 B% OWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# i, [% v; A7 @' T. a" n5 V; b  MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
6 {7 \: J0 d8 n7 NLove… just the word love
+ N5 X3 W4 n) P9 OWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! q: i: M% S1 g, HBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% u! X: Z7 n3 h5 E( H, L: _If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# x& e  j' {8 TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 h* e5 d8 T) ^  m" x* ]; d9 yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 r( D8 Y( _, ?: o5 PLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 L! k  ^% c6 T' zI want to confess that I love you,
4 u5 `* ?/ _9 s2 gBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. r" i# Q/ {% \" c. l( ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ ?6 }4 R  f8 g5 ~6 o<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 t( {1 d* F# |( `5 v# L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) `7 O2 L7 H$ J! V# U+ ~<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& D' y( \4 x# B2 n- y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 v, g# O) ^# c. y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! o  K. J& T% I+ h0 Q7 Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 F. A" e8 _& X- m" Y6 K: g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; W9 t1 y4 y. j, B. K5 V0 f. o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 {( ]1 V7 Y4 t: b# n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% J1 y" Q6 s+ }) ?. Y3 Q2 i" f" p' i<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# I2 s1 A6 z2 r: n6 m8 \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: W5 ]- Q, t4 q' l" k4 T$ U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 M5 g3 |2 C1 j, u6 I. h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# z) F; @1 H4 z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( `) ?, h5 F6 \$ K% w" o- v" J. D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, F4 o+ `' f" B) A<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: q5 k, S+ f( P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% B" o9 I( x! D; a/ G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 G' H) A3 U8 b% i  @+ l<P>But I never did </P>
0 L5 b& N9 k6 E: r<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  p1 A0 P: G  L8 [  |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- T* x% c3 |* C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) }8 E) Z1 p( c% d: ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) j  [7 J8 ^2 W! E. M( E+ v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' {* e) k& ?$ ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 U1 M2 S' o; F, [$ O; b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; E6 l* |2 j: _) D<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! y8 g2 c% I9 Z; p& O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! |4 W' f! o0 o. p" r0 ~. r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>