【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( k3 e5 |( H2 o9 j8 K3 JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. g' P& r8 F  H# h. oFrom the first moment we met,
3 A2 b( \& c* `" X- b$ d8 w3 `I already loved you with all my heart
9 f4 O6 B, D; v. H: LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 s, Y) d5 M% d) R& f& cI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 G2 F; ]4 |  Y9 U6 ]But I never did
0 Z9 C& [; f& G8 a8 W, _" B) pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 R6 {% j' |$ f4 A8 U! QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. k4 ?* I, H+ h% \9 m9 ~  \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# W" @1 ]) R' n" j5 K; [: l6 HI want to confess that I love you,
5 {& o4 [4 W6 ^But I never did
  w& \" q7 w5 q% ]. FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 A4 N/ y8 w$ T+ X1 @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 A/ k4 g0 M: gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  w0 |7 Y9 j( N. OEntrust my love within your heart
' S8 L- X& T$ z! W: TCan I entrust it to you?
2 r' t& w! u/ Y  QEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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) ^' j" h) d+ v# ^+ f<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ W0 G7 F( J! q3 h7 q0 A' C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" o5 {8 K  N4 I<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) H& E8 @% k, d( `* f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 W3 t  P* b* [2 y' L<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 U6 `5 {6 q6 i* w' K# C<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 Y; S1 H0 z/ a) H* K5 X2 |) H( A<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  n( a' l! g+ d$ ~: E0 Q0 y, g; ]% P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' P% s- N9 n- G- C2 h- K<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) Y9 l( j! C- a9 z- K  h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 }( B: Z, d! T' T# z, W& b$ {. |0 v<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 Q! ?* n# T$ z5 v( n* m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- Q/ J) W7 r0 ]* s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 p7 k. P$ i, {9 X! M( O9 Z3 v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 i" [8 R+ q4 e/ I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 E8 {! k1 J" N8 T  Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: g% y% x, d& P0 q' `0 I$ X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. ^2 M  a: ~7 K( \<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 [& V& x7 ~* t5 h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& q& d( H- b! \! u/ k  {2 H5 J<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 @- D; Q+ R2 ^: R<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( e- u9 Y7 k& l- q, }) @+ S<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& W6 Y4 @# N$ Q# o( c<P>But I never did </P>
- ~" _9 ^( W/ B  L, j- p<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% q3 j9 {* Y& I2 s5 u& P& e<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; e. @. a- {- h$ _; D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# ]- N# N2 g9 K3 A% l- O! }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 A- ]- H; ^( B! O& I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. g7 _8 o- Z( i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: f' V& f1 {7 W' k/ t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 n# ?9 Y7 S8 P7 }( |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ w% y3 i7 x" _( G% o: P<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) N$ q" {+ n( H9 U( u4 W这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 J1 }$ I) b0 Q0 e+ w% V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& Q1 u; H$ V3 y* V<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>