【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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7 Y/ S2 L  {' L0 [% K& U1 ?我另将歌词附在此。
9 o6 @$ a+ t$ _7 F, v  X/ [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 M7 d+ ]4 e! Q+ C% ~That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; x8 V+ N, U+ ^+ q- \We meet and talk everyday,
5 |% W% ?2 m, M, M  ?( V. SBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ p* a3 n6 W+ @  PI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& l9 c9 g3 E9 o; E+ tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 m0 g4 e, E- d2 `5 [+ C  XLove… just the word love
) ?9 _- Y7 g& |/ d/ Q7 N1 x4 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
9 |% d+ a0 o- j' a! \! F( u- {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. g: |8 {2 c$ [5 D. p/ IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ F! R' l/ G6 wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& e& Z/ c" J1 T+ m  S4 TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 N+ k8 E( K! U! c4 X% DCan I entrust it to you?
1 J5 n8 |; I+ v4 k+ t4 I; oEntrust my love within your heart
, T, c2 c! d7 `3 J$ TCan I entrust it to you?
: U/ i) S5 L9 T: u& y' eEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  K& s& \5 D1 e* F- h( {7 U5 `3 O<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; q' V6 f/ \0 w5 \# e0 t& @+ x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ @6 M" h: ?# o9 p3 r* F$ T. T- `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 @6 W* j( u# Y% B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# i! ~/ D  _- q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. ^& Z: t  }# O+ ~<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 _8 `: K6 L0 Y. N! L<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# @3 S" Q- W. s. q: _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: i9 ]( a+ v* }0 {8 |) c4 I/ R<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& k! A: G' Z/ t  P% ?7 v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) O) B. x+ I# F5 Y/ W& O0 u<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* T, Q) m& q( A1 t7 n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* O( S( @* z+ T* D/ Z' |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
4 g  p2 d- e7 J( \' P8 o<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 H: w1 ~: C: A: e- s: U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ `9 z0 V7 n$ K' c  W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 p3 R9 W) v, U( V( P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ F# j, D$ |; b' L5 y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. ^* h& R3 h2 b+ `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 o+ F- m+ X/ y' F3 ^<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# P, J2 [: g8 j: P% ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 G& R) Q9 ?2 l0 I' f; B6 C, n/ u<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 z. L1 h+ p4 z% g$ g6 W2 I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( j3 l# Z5 ^) D' R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 B+ K8 Z3 A: r9 p5 R) @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 z' N# I6 A9 p5 x6 V: u( c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" w( c: `" x5 [) Y4 S" q; P5 J5 J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 ]/ \0 R$ @. d# Y! f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ D9 w* u! ~8 e3 u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 Y" P4 p( M/ z6 x4 h<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 G  G, c  T: c1 V; F<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>