【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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6 @3 {. c& U5 D. n: k我另将歌词附在此。
2 y8 l9 P' J" S) [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 G' E! C0 {' hThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% v: v0 d: Q) F, SI already loved you with all my heart
4 l' w: M1 m# z( A7 CWe meet and talk everyday,
0 S6 E4 E. A; T. w+ QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( m/ s# }, G- r1 K% p( ^! mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# J6 f& x% o1 [* q7 A5 _% |: HI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% r9 S$ w) r% t" j+ y3 _Why is it so difficult to express?
' h( L1 V1 u( z5 CI want to confess that I love you,
2 W# g% o$ s' W+ o1 n& g4 U# WBut I never did
; q! k" J% E% ]* X1 f% bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 G5 I/ s- u. y# ^+ m/ i/ IIf today isn’t too late,
9 x2 C3 L  g4 h/ ^; P. k6 S7 AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  b4 S- N1 j) VEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. M2 N8 [% `) y* ?! a# bBut I never did
2 v  {1 p- g  ?1 n/ A' mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" l1 r+ t0 p. GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 Q2 s$ J5 ~$ ~+ z, F1 @( S7 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) s. Y3 C9 A. xEntrust my love within your heart
+ r% [( |9 j5 Z; Z. s. |# dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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8 V; w9 l% H8 B" M, [7 G6 b# Y! s5 M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% _+ [1 |. m3 K, m$ q  x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. T' e' s3 e3 s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, ~' r! E6 o$ m6 k* U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* V2 s5 w7 U: o$ l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. t5 O! C+ e6 y) h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, v8 C" Z5 A# H+ V- S7 ?- h. {5 Z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: s) H! w' h6 P8 N+ j7 d! `<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% a( B, {& J( i1 Q* H0 W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) B( P' k4 T$ ]+ [! ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ E( K/ p! N5 N9 X% ?<P>但我不会</P>
% I( s8 d' O4 l( A: A<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 ?2 d% I: h5 u" J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* n( D. f" d+ [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; _, [+ }' ~, H. o1 m. K. J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ N  M8 H7 P2 A$ a6 b3 F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ U$ B, X4 k0 {! i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 m. J; Q# e+ m8 ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, V  A! l; {3 u0 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 u" n4 S' V: V4 V+ d/ N9 C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, A$ w0 ?- i' A" D$ |! X<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 O$ |5 F9 d( O9 ^2 e<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& |1 i* k. @* i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; N# P) e7 W2 U+ J/ q1 F& b# ~- C<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 R' A0 F; j! O$ F5 k1 ?% ?3 [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 \. v7 {: w; `8 m: l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 Q. M  a3 D7 W, @+ W! r! Z5 V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, A: @+ z9 C9 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; \# X5 ~5 d, j  e; m) l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& ~0 h- F, f- L  Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- a( r! o) g" i9 P! ?1 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 r3 _) c  E8 k1 G* t<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 M% [% d% a' ?( b- @( c<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, y8 I. Z! Y( a1 s9 n. { 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- S, b! I5 E: R# g; `7 v1 n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>