【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
7 a2 n$ ]7 |! o6 j% X' O% |) nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  p% {( z! [, Z, s* `- @I already loved you with all my heart
7 B- N5 d1 ?  U( N- s  u" k, {( IWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ E, F- ]& |, q! d# UWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" C/ [8 e6 q( w! h, W, sBut I never did
+ L0 {) Y6 t& n9 x$ qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& Q1 s: o* F: Q0 F: r# TIf today isn’t too late,
+ J: o" U' n% }0 H& DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( @8 a9 e# n% m7 `& K( VCan I entrust it to you?
- }9 @% c# K& b' J3 f8 wEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 z8 l8 f0 k8 ]' T& ?) xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# q1 H1 i/ ^' N/ b$ oIf today isn’t too late,
. v; N* h' K& h' h0 m8 X2 v. G3 HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 J9 |: Y! \8 G' _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 {- t- P8 c% w/ @Entrust my love within your heart
' R! G! Q6 P4 a, }Can I entrust it to you?
" R' |  D$ y; R" C, w/ AEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% H. K5 l$ D; j6 F. r4 n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  t, ~  X2 `6 N3 t# |6 g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 P# g+ r; i! }( k1 I$ u<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 p+ H# Z2 B& i4 W3 _! ~, R<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 T9 T" b: ?; \3 g$ a<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% Q& J& z. j* ?6 n2 f3 ]+ G<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! m& M7 a! {- X! S, {  R<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ X. a4 s/ [: x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 B* ^$ |8 z: y7 W<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  S: n" B! u# K2 Q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 |6 c: K1 H2 q: q2 }<P>但我不会</P>
- Q3 E/ _. l+ W# P1 l: c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- Z# _0 s8 [& A* o3 X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 h& e* w& g5 Y  q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 t! ~; _1 |# A* q: B8 w$ C, o% v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 W& K- |$ {4 m8 z6 M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" I  Q# K4 U3 W" w: g6 ~, O& G: p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 I5 |0 B( I% e2 }<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: l3 V* w+ w/ q! e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ Y# i! |; O4 ?) l; w* m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 B; {/ a: M. P/ M<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
" N! B7 D0 c/ ~4 i$ L6 k<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 h2 G$ n. K" }3 |; R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ a# D- f: [* x9 z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" W0 J: b, Y  r  O* P% Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- q6 I" i- q5 f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 R% f6 n1 Z" K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  m9 s; Q/ C. c% I9 U# Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 N" q, J1 A4 {$ A# i8 M$ G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 H# b2 X' u8 ]<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>