【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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# X: D* X. @% T5 _9 U% o! c我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 T; X9 v) C/ S/ x1 Z3 r0 a% Q( gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 [0 P. ~& P0 y( @9 w- j; |4 tFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
+ A5 E% Q% F; K' yWe meet and talk everyday,
$ v' w1 H1 I/ B. E# K0 [! ~3 @5 NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  y" W5 @' b, k7 K# t& ~4 YI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( d5 b+ H6 a0 w8 ]! MI want to confess that I love you,
1 i- j: k. p/ z3 o+ r- m3 w  ^" FBut I never did
1 y2 `1 q: c& J' b# ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# I1 i( s" i# L2 d0 q6 _' \Can I entrust it to you?
% C7 i$ s, p' e9 N9 _* G! Q  L8 vEntrust my love within your heart
9 b. p( g; |$ ]* v3 V! O( GLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  v( ]( x# \! x% F+ R) U9 hI want to confess that I love you,
7 G3 x7 l& x( E& Z4 bBut I never did
7 A% U# _6 \( r( E, ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 I4 \. T( _# `: nIf today isn’t too late,
) x! A* s2 g9 ^6 J1 xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

9 l5 @$ d! q5 h2 f. j+ D/ P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 G9 b  v8 [3 d3 \3 r, A" L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* J2 D% B5 G, u1 @; s<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 M. S: J. B' B% [9 H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 u; M) c; `# [  p; ?3 ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, l3 h' q+ Y2 x8 o- ^+ E6 r<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; ^/ Y; p+ r& n5 N3 \<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" y) j6 L! d$ q) _3 [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 b! A2 d2 t8 e9 Q. ^/ l4 w<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 f& W1 S5 q! b/ i2 C1 x+ I. \" p8 z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; h- k$ K' ]: k6 h, }5 X1 e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, @! K: {4 M$ n+ _! y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! Y) ?8 l. N. d2 ~* W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# s6 y& r2 ^6 j" }2 O9 ^5 o# d<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; `6 H) P8 N7 {1 {! S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! C* t+ O6 `7 S& W% g" ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  K% k+ k5 y0 D' m& D3 a/ V& M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# A; q7 F( U/ Z: a- j3 j0 |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% d- t7 C# F5 n' g8 n0 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( [, E: e( N; @: A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% o/ L  F8 X. r# m<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' P. g5 V' N2 Q# [* J<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 N$ Q' v" z4 ]$ \<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) h: Q6 e7 L) T, O% d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% J) P+ j6 [. \2 G( |! i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% B( k" [1 M- x" [( Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# B" [4 Q/ T4 H. ^& s9 d- C2 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) i# s4 J- {: b3 M, b1 q) j' @6 u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 w, Q4 ~1 J7 Q+ h3 k$ g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 ?; `  @# O0 X% m: H, _1 Z 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ Q& j! v! o7 D) y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>