【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
+ X, B* H8 ]' P6 P2 G. eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
5 k6 H! [4 L4 V" H" {" vWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- k9 x8 Q' }4 K9 J' Z6 ]; R# F1 }. CIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( E, G) o& `  R, Q/ ?$ t9 cLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 [! N5 ~/ J, H5 g$ z4 LBut I never did
9 L8 T) B1 ?0 iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 E. X" l9 {) Q, A2 D6 ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 N6 ~% m2 |8 W2 d( h2 aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ P' j; P$ q- c( l/ d8 M4 Z7 fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 f3 C! b6 F) w$ V+ {: \; _7 {! z" }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; F2 {/ i1 o4 H% ^1 @If today isn’t too late,
5 ~3 S% O9 A! X1 _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* z- k2 L8 \, m9 xCan I entrust it to you?
9 J/ g: m; a3 _5 e* n  }Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 r. X0 x/ ~1 `$ l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" ?. ^. V8 k/ x' B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 G9 f. d5 A; K; V; f2 p4 O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# M" F5 {* B9 G3 ?1 _4 s6 A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 |" M& M! {8 L* x; H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: G: [: n6 w8 ?& C8 T! g( J) M/ K<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 J" c  E( b! i0 v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' k+ W0 c$ g# v- _$ z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) ^( k+ B7 M; J0 e" H! N) ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ y& [; E" k+ e/ Q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, w- y& R  N( C: ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  }- M( u! q0 d# r" x- ^0 i( L9 y1 H<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% W* F! g. ~% x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# x8 Y5 W# A. M/ H" V7 n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 k$ f' A' r2 ^" o# J- c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 ~' U5 Y6 @8 R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  g% ^, D- h. ^3 N6 E( @% r/ M4 t0 {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 e$ w$ {8 o  I& \) r. E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% D' N0 \3 C. a9 I/ s$ y2 z" J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& p+ q9 |1 S5 a% d2 C$ @  X0 ]<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" J( n' a& @7 O5 R3 a8 D. I! @$ T+ B<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 e4 g+ F. ~' N" a" L" ]- k<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 a$ Q& v: N/ ?* h! F# ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- x9 \% o  U) l( f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 f/ h  m  O2 \% ^" d  m5 \- X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 u2 x2 ~( _0 ?  O$ @7 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ C+ f" M' U3 {) Z% g! M* j0 U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- g( `  z' t4 a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  [+ a9 e! O; y! }4 z' {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ }3 b3 }# F, b% m6 C" t" r<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 P0 X% I( z% q; Z+ K<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& \8 W9 `( O1 u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- V: J6 E- a; W! R) H  x2 @& q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>