【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, F/ Q( y8 e! H4 \$ @Making the sky glitter like gold,
, {$ A( m+ v$ p5 {4 i' OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. p, x# ]) A9 [# Z0 e$ U, {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  U' f: |% P% q" {6 h' |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 E; U) n" l7 AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" \/ P# q2 V( u/ s0 D- WEvery other word you utter is love
! ~: T7 P$ U7 X+ `/ D, _6 }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! `9 {% G( b8 w! _7 R$ {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( j* Y% E7 d3 z9 U6 u- G1 E* r6 n2 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( @/ G. J4 D* h' h6 _, S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ A) Z+ x4 X' [) o4 U* V/ V5 @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ d6 Q9 \; D* P1 p/ X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 |9 D% ]& J( z; L# F. V, n" O2 i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# N5 k1 Y3 q$ X9 E+ }% M* L1 ^7 a/ H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) e  ]4 J/ U7 L- X0 t# t/ Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# q6 w9 P& }( h6 _+ ]1 L5 h, K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 A- Y, N" s* t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# C" L1 \- [3 R  S, J6 I8 p2 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ e/ s2 w! s% K* T: Z/ X% L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 f4 y& z- w0 y( ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 x' O0 |6 n$ M$ v+ [% v% y) K2 V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 L+ X; `1 x  j/ e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 {# s5 }7 ?; v0 X1 M! j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' {9 Y0 C  D1 Q5 d8 i# ^- o6 I+ O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( R5 G3 A3 L+ v' {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, Q3 A2 h/ h+ O6 K" H1 p# n8 B% Q2 f* d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# b; i. W5 h9 P. V0 z3 k" j: V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 e5 k  R$ `* }% [% e: R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: s, l# e& {! }* l& U* @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 X8 f" ]- P  J* p9 P1 ]& K6 c6 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ A% n4 R; ?# M% N& y  Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" ~! b  Y  h0 |+ g% w- A0 D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 \$ c/ v  b, N. o" @  ?  r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, U- l$ a( c) Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 Y8 @7 v- E5 p, k2 n6 r* ~! E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; x# y+ p$ B. s: B( `6 |/ B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# x& }+ o9 K+ w: o2 e1 T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" r' s5 N( _1 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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% g% V! s+ ^4 J% v0 ]8 U0 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>