【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! k7 h" e& r* u1 c歌词我附在后面。
8 r9 o( f! r4 HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- o  M) M! w5 D2 }2 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  W" n) |8 V0 _7 \7 _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, @! n" O* s0 c: o! ^2 m. RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* b" ?. V) x8 t' M; S1 kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  |" Q+ o" k/ `  w% g7 x3 z0 iEvery other word you utter is love
# A% H7 E  f, J! zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  d% n; X% u9 P' l8 N* m0 iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 Q( s, j6 w% s& Z8 A* E0 UI’m still filled with fear
* m) j$ |! p) r2 x0 v5 o, FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) g+ G$ x3 ?$ O& k! l; ~# `I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ P1 a& k' |" ^9 i4 L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 H0 l/ w, V0 p, `1 J* A! o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& R$ H5 c) O( y6 X" i. {+ X& W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 t3 E# s7 i5 ~2 a/ C* `) W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 d0 t8 Y1 V' e8 i! U) \! U* k  @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# f9 g' M% V; n* N8 h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) y9 k7 x* U) @- B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ l) O" T( T4 O' E* P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 v- M9 F1 ^( h. G) V1 T& ]8 x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 b; G1 M. c- w8 |  W' M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 h( b% k6 H1 D) n* o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, i1 o: V! D! U+ C+ D6 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( e9 U2 k1 E" N4 j9 y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* n/ [3 M6 A/ o% S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ \" w2 o! b+ c6 {2 M+ c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 M0 c' J4 P) e* |7 K7 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% Z& _0 y) K" Q  `& u; F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 G' U2 o& N2 A7 W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ x$ H3 |! I6 |3 d  Z+ K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- a3 c  F4 q7 R2 Y7 |5 d# W: H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, t1 H+ r0 Y, H9 R7 d! k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, \5 P# @4 t5 \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& i- q3 w% F, H2 H% G7 h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ S# ^3 X. {0 F" g2 a; O% f; @我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& R, u- b4 R1 ?, y5 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>