【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" p; }; x, [/ J0 U1 \3 U  x4 gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 B5 O4 z$ m* R! U5 I- `; YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 o  q; ~- @; S% s& D& \You needn’t fear anything
3 Q5 v4 J1 }. ^$ o8 o- }- `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 U6 t; B% [3 f) ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  s: b5 F2 c  _; oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 D% u9 y+ E. E) M- qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- P% W7 X1 W( |# j2 wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& H1 G9 V; [, z8 Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# H4 X9 z, W7 a( e6 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" D5 n' O  L+ K/ l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( O: o1 X- t" b& P, ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 ?- b0 @, L1 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ V; l4 D  \: T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ {% o4 k) Y9 w4 ?  t, w1 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% p8 q+ Q- ^! [; n( i3 F& G0 y. V<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: U& x9 A) p* h2 \: M' E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. }1 ~9 W# b3 n0 t* }3 E; z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; o3 R4 e: O; }' c6 Y! y2 M% ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 f  Y% h6 M0 D6 t) F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# L! D  W: n' A9 O+ D  _# k# \* `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 o- P- n# z% O: O8 p4 F9 l% e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 K+ x# ?: K! k5 P: ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* t, A" N, O. H* M9 E+ C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 S3 K+ h( y! P9 m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' i+ x/ u0 y5 P+ }9 t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" B/ g0 l2 u. Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& y$ I# H) R; }  L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, J% Q- y+ e2 c7 d# Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: h5 Y; I1 v8 Q  I. L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& Q% ]( R8 C' R* p' i. ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>