【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 m9 t5 K8 f: k1 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 Q1 z3 h* _4 M. c' O% n4 U% RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 K( W1 Y( p8 R7 q: W8 I3 \The sky is happy down to its soul
' i) f1 e+ R( i! l( ^7 @& XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 n+ Q6 Y, O  U/ E8 m  r/ _) u  CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 H$ {- H4 z! b$ n1 R: r0 y/ _. W8 P* LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 B# r" k; a- q/ I: v* H- pEvery other word you utter is love
# l( E6 O( ^; I* fI really want to know just how much you love me
* ]: S7 {" W, I% U, M- S3 F/ y" \& MI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 N; `6 m( C! }" u  D* E0 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 g2 N$ q9 `/ Y5 Z/ mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" n; e! _7 _# g$ h0 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' Z/ s# q. g0 B3 e: N, n6 }6 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' y- z7 P/ Y0 Z. p- e2 n2 k" Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) `& k7 G7 }! f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 d2 \# U& W/ c- j' b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 d7 s  e/ i6 P! U3 r$ x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* y' S) _6 c4 C. \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  K' X0 Z9 Q  K* |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 {# v' G6 Y* s$ A2 Q1 z1 m8 Z7 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. K8 h: ^# h" d+ [) Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: _% `# [3 W$ V; G; P% Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  `; K* M* p" n% I4 W" N8 V" d8 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# S8 c' ?0 ?/ e1 Z% i3 _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 Y; i" t8 }! M0 K- r1 k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( X& T9 R" G! F. b; V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ r* G3 ?/ q, W; e& u: A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  b: I) M- v; a9 n( ?+ _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, t1 ~/ ?# A/ E9 }1 _) @7 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 @  U: @. a! _; x" j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 t8 E5 M% @3 j# v8 V) l( c" O' N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! ^+ x1 K/ r% \: B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- Y# O6 L% z( Q3 B; j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, u# t% ~! g* o. x" n. Y) h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 j* \* r: O/ B* _% ^6 y# d: ?9 [& ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' q' Z1 f  c  n6 b7 t# B( J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  A3 V* I) d7 G5 K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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. z% d7 z3 G3 T$ q5 H; a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ }& A& T) s4 G% q9 _0 d1 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" x  Z9 Q) F3 x& [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 ~/ A  B; k' I0 {' G+ R; R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 K" K, u8 R6 v; a3 ^7 o5 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- S2 c$ N8 E( W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( F6 o* ^! r) k+ h, p: M我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>