【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% T7 x9 J+ r( `6 _( W2 w% uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 ^; H3 U7 `) E$ c0 z6 d) NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# }( u4 b! ^: p8 ?# c2 `9 m: DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ U! J& Z5 r& @5 ]8 CSeeing the sky content with its love
2 F, F# I* s3 L& oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 x$ L  `) |/ m' j* [4 E& BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( n# e* }) W* L4 [8 X, @9 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) Z% }+ q! V0 WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ p1 Z3 \8 p4 Z# qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& Q/ {" e/ C, t- \" dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! K: S$ m+ ~0 ~( xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* e1 K5 n5 P' M; _6 s+ @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! l9 T4 ]1 m0 }! r+ i8 D$ S5 T8 C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 D! W6 }  \' D5 D$ x% x, D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 f7 z+ t6 X, M6 w) w" O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ X% j. g% U& u, V% i) M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& e; l& n. U; y( a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 A2 ~* t- e+ s2 Y, u. a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& {0 Z# O7 Z% ~" [' [  Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! ~; J6 r, s9 f" w& ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( q. [% }. x& ^) U9 D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 ]  z. g/ b7 ^% D, \0 [# f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 T- u& n. m( H4 Y! C6 E0 v8 X2 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 k) |* t: p, C5 ]* s9 a' M/ D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% _% u: h3 `! P* I# ]<P>你无需担心</P>
' X0 K( O% w6 T- i' X' W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 M3 l4 n" O2 k4 ~% l& E6 G* ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ [" ]& f$ M- {  z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ }9 c! e/ v6 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 i/ X3 \3 c! L( ~& g* ^: G! _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ m  p; o$ L/ ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 y+ t$ L: a% p$ B9 j2 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& H/ S, [2 v- {9 K7 d' u8 n, ]. F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 b0 \" t" H  z, P/ o! T5 c' t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. X) j6 m& x& k5 @" |: \& u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 a8 E& l  V' U: K4 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( E- L+ b9 ]; y1 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 v9 d9 O' }" ?, U  U% q9 K( t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* w% Y6 _3 `) k  C) {9 t6 I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 E0 O4 k6 ~& @: S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ |! v7 ~8 U6 }* @# h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 D! M& K( F* t; n+ a* I/ m0 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. m9 M6 s4 D' s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 H9 i) x4 O  v* M, s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 t3 l$ i+ U  z8 L& z4 J1 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 g! |/ e3 ^. L$ t$ C! p' ?7 W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>