【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  ^8 X- C( L5 I6 gWith the moon kissing it every night
. d- Z6 h' W3 W0 u' xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) u. S9 Y/ d- f) `8 F& lYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; u; n5 U4 W4 R( u4 W5 G% ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 v5 K3 ]5 o# U. O6 LNothing can compare to my love
% l" [- \8 F6 @4 V1 H4 gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 ?1 c$ w( W0 f* }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' }( I# w* r  Z; OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! r* E$ z1 n, t; K1 Q6 W$ p8 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; G- x$ ]" g9 u0 P7 Z+ cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( z. `( e  G! s! EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 k6 ^9 L9 C" eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 a- V4 @  t% M# s  R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 p$ K$ K+ f2 m+ ?% m# g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* O1 p% t4 q2 n% ]1 t; k: t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 \' n/ g' x, t+ s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 H; ?: J* e; E' l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 G; S2 |2 D7 r! _* f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 O+ B. R" k2 V8 c, J" `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, _: b7 K( {) h/ x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 k3 n' n  u1 U6 g4 {( s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* N* M7 l' A% b$ g! N7 c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ d: A/ C2 `( O3 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ]7 M/ U( T5 G& D+ `. \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 ?' R' E. q; P* o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( v3 @0 ?, J1 |. E. D) D2 [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) K% _5 T2 Q8 L5 E9 s4 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 C* B& o7 L8 j! z, T" E7 a( _. z$ K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: N- a0 i. b( ^7 b2 y, w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ X+ B6 C6 Z/ d  K, _7 k! t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 D- V- X3 S6 w  s1 {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; @, E& D7 |' H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  ^9 M; ?5 \) T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( J  p1 i; i, D8 W, y% `9 Z* c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 W/ z0 Z8 x# t% P7 X+ I0 h! _0 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  v  [/ H7 y, A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- x, d2 D2 n" U. G! S) _% v8 k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 X  ~8 Z6 r" x' G! ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 \" a/ `4 L9 ?- [' J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) s5 P& j, R+ K3 v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 U; f! D( @1 z6 a* t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: |" y0 v7 w1 ^8 O) o3 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ S* M5 B1 U, R$ i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 I7 }0 B* R3 m, q# m$ t. m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; y2 ]: X2 [0 Z) C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>