【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  d4 p9 c: c9 J. }' r  x( GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 S% U3 `4 H$ j% N6 F) S" nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 K& n3 Z; Q! J. @$ E) [5 |The sky is happy down to its soul
7 G& _5 d$ D2 ?4 e, O; nWith the moon kissing it every night
$ l/ b( l9 E; W: D. hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 o- c5 S( E1 M  z2 c/ cYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 K/ w/ P8 T4 A4 sI love you I love you with all my heart
2 i5 m% r& _. ^2 sNothing can compare to my love
8 |/ s: k& b1 C. xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. d9 H3 H' A9 R  o/ y9 |% [) d- [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 |& h1 O2 M: r/ Z9 D% NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' R, M3 I# j8 f/ ^$ V' s8 W+ X- bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  d: d3 Y) M7 J. P4 @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ w" w1 U$ M4 h5 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 g, F1 [2 F6 k0 d4 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ A/ R8 \4 b! D, W; U: ]" m- m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( A' S( s% N8 z" z8 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) u. ], K* Q6 _9 O" e/ b3 T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  i. A! Y, ^& L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" h# r; \. C6 O& P! q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' Z8 I- R* [# O8 T6 }1 j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* |( m, ?0 q1 a( Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 w7 Q, U& ^  z" i" P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 U" _3 ^, m/ Q7 g- c  R5 ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, y& K6 a+ X9 q& ~& ]2 [( k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 i( }0 g1 }& l+ ^: a; Z% b% l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( o! R  D1 M9 |$ ^! _/ R0 l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 [) {- g/ L/ |# z# ~, \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 ^+ W$ V4 G6 v6 @9 Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; V- u/ y6 [0 ?5 |# A4 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ z  u- w! Q5 z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& H' S0 r/ L2 M) j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& d: P/ ^" E- G2 ?: V( R7 [1 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' B8 Z# r& [- e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 @. m$ d1 N4 ~# n; F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 ~1 K) X6 l# }" W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: }) ]( d( H7 w3 |+ H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, Q$ L$ h4 U5 ?* v* N4 \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# q) L( Z5 S" Q) y1 s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" k& w4 \' |% [) t: L/ O8 @% d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# R; y  Q. m, d+ ?  g" Q. ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 W2 g. N+ L+ n3 Q" D) s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" |7 I' D3 i" W1 T$ s1 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 Y  D& _9 g; W% E4 i2 ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 j3 _* `3 E/ f! H; S! U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 ?' E+ j, w: r0 P% E/ j6 Q1 I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>