【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' ^; l: Y/ P) B, w5 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 a8 x: `0 R& e( S0 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 n& D- o" R: T; oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% [2 u6 n7 y- L" c8 WSeeing the sky content with its love
3 c$ q% s+ |- J9 m9 o8 p- AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- p2 G/ b/ b; v" K/ sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ n5 j/ k3 U* }$ v' j& uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( Y  L& _7 e' K7 Y7 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: R& `2 y* n4 b6 S7 R, o, m/ O& kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% b5 q& W4 N! [5 e& kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 _' f( Y- X" gI regret not dying
1 _2 l' u" o! p4 x+ O3 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ n! K# T, s/ c7 p! A" IWith such a tongue as yours,
. }( m- g5 O# K- T% ?$ Q2 {! ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ a$ B/ ]- H! ^) r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& V9 m+ w; f- B) E5 G+ e2 E$ `( ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 B) A; ]7 ~: b  }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# S1 G7 m) }5 B2 v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 \, q( d. O4 W/ r1 n8 K/ l& y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 A2 _; X+ q7 M4 ]+ n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 x4 L9 U, A: s5 F+ y2 E2 a* S6 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& G4 B9 G/ |& @8 P* O<P>你无需担心</P>
. j- Y/ L0 O& W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& S0 F  u/ {3 t$ H. X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( [6 R& Z& G: I( e, y5 w( K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 A3 b/ o' J/ V/ W1 A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 V8 e' K$ C9 t' J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 Q  O4 Z: g# A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: K. n- x6 @8 h$ D! `- f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 m* `4 N3 o) `' Q% B3 y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. {' `- ^9 _! y1 L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 P7 z! {2 ~2 i1 X- {. z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' t9 D, S3 e4 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ h. ?2 \) v! C& n$ H9 ?5 ?' W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- i& Z! S) Z* S6 |4 v3 r% u+ Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, F6 v7 I' B7 c, R6 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 _) P. i: ]4 G: N) Z7 g& L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( U: p& U; T/ p2 F2 U2 _; I0 d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 H, k/ q) e/ c9 b2 Q) g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ P0 Y+ I. ]. [: w- L我请你剖开它
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0 r9 s$ Y( ~' @# Q) H. d) ^+ l  x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  A" `8 H$ O5 ]0 l8 _8 V! Z; ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>