【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! E% }+ j* t6 T2 `- r! }* {9 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 H8 M$ v2 G; R4 x# DThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 K+ N0 a/ C: a1 k, aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- U- i  B9 l1 o4 F. x5 ]" Y* IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* J# w5 y$ Z& _8 \& AI really want to know just how much you love me
3 O6 k1 Y3 K0 F* y; ^. l) t3 F8 dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 l; U  ^' j( eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! l% E' d0 s5 N$ _1 d9 QI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 s- Q3 h9 b$ J$ EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# ^1 g6 [! D0 }4 C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 V) r* L, y$ R9 @4 C) q5 r% h! N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! f: v7 K- s! F! o. y9 Q7 ]6 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 s9 S, `4 C0 C* n7 I6 g) R0 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  l' C4 y' ^$ M6 n% x0 ^1 y, h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; n6 t- b% r% F! C: V- d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 d( W. _, c; t4 {: S5 }3 f& @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 q0 f  X4 U% U! b3 J# I* P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  X  e. F, W, t6 F<P>你无需担心</P>
! N9 N" c# ?/ e, T' p8 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! t( c0 ?9 m. v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 d" d0 q; H/ w' O7 V) G# ^; I9 ]) z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 f5 K. _+ y; K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 ~  r$ S' E8 t; c( l3 y" F1 E& g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( P% c+ t! L5 X1 B0 }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 V) l5 Y% b9 @! f) ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. F8 J: @6 b* z6 f* R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! }  \% J7 w% E# P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 N3 d, L% l9 x6 p' [# ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ }, Y; i$ H4 `$ ?) s) {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% s; E+ n) ?8 K! O8 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" q  y$ U. y) }8 W5 _- S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 H. Y1 o; b# H' ^  b9 F# {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  i% r6 X0 A( U% {6 O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ v4 q3 _# f& ?. f2 O, f8 p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# o( m; C/ K9 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 E( O& b& |) v2 A4 c2 \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, o, F  n5 F! b! S. c9 ]6 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" g8 I. U3 G  o5 }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: G: P2 h" O1 F% n3 @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 q8 W( _: g- x9 D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! C$ Q5 w/ L# r9 L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- C  U* ?- F7 o! Z" _( t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 x/ t, z$ k* \+ a5 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* l& Q7 F9 h7 f: b7 r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( K1 o) W- E5 u: H/ M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) p% f5 D3 [- S/ B3 T; ]+ A我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ T6 k9 u4 h( {* m* R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>