【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) Z. o) v( R- t& @2 @& P: q* wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% N! H! |  d/ ?! sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% p/ ?2 y7 p! E& G5 z; vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  j! l$ @8 M3 m( Q  P- z# ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; M" Z. O& }5 f; EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ r6 x7 C: m( D7 J) _Seeing the sky content with its love
) \- [0 A* U: ~0 Y1 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 X( }6 @6 g0 t3 g  x- C# NEvery other word you utter is love
2 e- X/ `2 J+ V$ g3 A3 W( k( VI really want to know just how much you love me
% E4 p9 G$ o5 o( C3 m% OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 D+ V' W6 n* L+ Q5 jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 e9 P$ K/ d) Y* [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& A/ M8 Z. ~; A9 I3 NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, _" o/ Y7 y0 ?9 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 B7 V) q: w' X, f# H& h1 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( v* b& M  ?9 K6 v: F) I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; w7 b/ U  k9 j0 [7 j' k! V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* ~. I% x8 G; S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 o$ j/ Q6 c( h7 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ B5 _9 d- g+ C* B9 X+ g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, t  S0 e3 u$ p( U* B% k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: q- n( X! Q# @3 ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* |- }6 a' [1 o7 O: q+ G0 j! G<P>你无需担心</P>
! K2 @/ t- B; _9 u" L1 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 F9 l- C: w% K; e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* a8 v+ [6 k+ V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 q. ^) g! I; i: ?4 |) b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 F. s; ?0 S9 L, `' d3 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 F6 D/ V' @, D* ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* r- D3 ]. ^" u7 q& l" [6 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. }. k, u# Q8 V7 k; \7 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& Q+ _0 A0 Z% l! V2 k$ z4 `2 n: {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 e$ I* @( n7 I( t5 s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 r9 A! `/ P7 y0 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 Z: r$ i& @% j* w  }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; O* [! r/ Q; P8 t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 r8 T2 y& U" ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: J* t- ]$ o0 Y) G8 M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 N7 |3 D( P) J<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ [& q7 g, N+ d; Y+ B7 C6 b. H! D5 _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- h1 G* r' S6 A, q5 ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: c$ A7 j0 H% g2 K- C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

/ P- `: x: E' R" S7 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>