【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ S; y4 v, z( X' J7 F9 sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 y3 \, W! P6 C+ |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: S; G2 l5 ?% W+ i4 [. G  [  m8 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# ~5 g) |0 m6 wSeeing the sky content with its love
9 y6 v8 i- S) oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: @$ V) [; `) yYou needn’t fear anything
: ?& a- `; r4 i; w/ RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 r* h8 m! N1 F; e; R4 `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ O/ V6 K9 X) g" J2 \% ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 S# [/ |% U  i8 h+ u7 a/ q) r: OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. E; D) X( i4 o) g. e1 WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, g" [( T  r" b: SI regret not dying
9 L5 R. y/ E( V1 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' t8 j4 A! N: C3 yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  {7 c. ^' g, z7 C3 @+ uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: ]% \# M! ]. h" g* `& a5 r2 g8 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 @1 B" K2 ?9 }+ R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" `  o& e; t+ h5 S& `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ Z2 Y$ ]" p/ y0 D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) V7 i) w2 `1 W  U0 Y( u  S5 T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- E( Z% s# x: ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ v* [( C( L3 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ G% f; H' r" B: F( i  Y8 X- y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' F+ {1 u2 g+ O( G( Y; x7 f. H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 a1 Y8 M3 z) H4 H2 W: l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 t: r1 t1 B* Z& Z9 v4 i3 Q4 ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 ]0 A3 I) \: |1 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ D* Q. e7 ~( g% \- }( \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 e# P$ ^5 b1 }, I$ C8 T1 K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# s" @$ Z, x1 |: K: y4 }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, c+ |! }+ x. d: `' s. Z6 ~: \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 w' e# Y% e) E. o/ T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  b& F0 W9 S7 ?+ `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 v4 ^! d( @) W% ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ M* h0 Q. a% c, u% Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( W- X4 j6 Y: g" C( p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# u% s( J2 O% e* @& \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 b* P- C( f# K4 M9 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- l/ H; Q, X) u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; e+ q6 C& Z5 F3 b" H<P>I regret not dying</P>
( b: n% |" [. ?: h9 j& [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& |$ z0 N! }* B' {/ _( ^/ @7 W  b) Z0 e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ c- P( V5 d' @) e: ^* B) b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. Y4 h8 w! P! f5 J5 w( t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% s. U+ q$ ^; |4 G7 b* `4 u7 p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 c0 z$ P. D8 o  N, e. I( ^  ^, c我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>