【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. ~/ M. |8 @' O! p8 o歌词我附在后面。
1 A0 [1 V9 z3 E& i$ bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# ~" q# g( w0 U- p( `4 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 D/ p2 k, q9 [, t; L( ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* ?, Z/ `3 Y! T) [The sky is happy down to its soul
( ^% i! b" V3 v5 D8 AWith the moon kissing it every night
6 v5 x$ A- q: w4 ?6 ~0 lSeeing the sky content with its love
  E4 K. C. ~# }2 k9 V1 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 l7 ^, o- D" G7 r4 gYou needn’t fear anything
: F& k* e9 |/ L0 d* OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 O0 F5 w' U. A$ w% J& U1 I' \3 dEvery other word you utter is love
1 j! A  q+ A+ P( {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" w) ?; F8 Z' BNothing can compare to my love
+ [! ^: a! ~% Z: \1 j  p7 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# n. J6 _, v1 K& f% ^5 G2 z+ nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, X/ f+ y) i1 A5 uI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ p8 B, ~  K" q1 W9 U# BI’m still filled with fear
% P; y$ `% _# H& e, CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# T& f4 F& p/ HI regret not dying
7 l* Y% a7 E5 |; B6 O( l; K! O" ]2 z- A# zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; x3 B8 n  i; t% QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ x0 t9 q0 F3 P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( E3 R5 Q" q( F5 w" U; y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; \$ t2 z. G2 J0 c; }6 J: H<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 n; a1 ~. o# }$ H8 ?& I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ L) ?: w& S9 u7 o! I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; m! b' F* }/ O! t( M. h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 J, G0 n8 ^8 N1 s" E9 m% C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 |. q, f$ N: m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% O) m0 w- M- }8 Z! z( z7 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* K1 ]3 w& @, O" _, H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  o: m+ N* U6 K4 E7 M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- \  ?/ ~" f+ o: I# \% A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 o) ~8 v0 _- `0 ~& Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  z* W0 k* v# `  z% D! G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, P+ C$ E# t3 J8 Q- E" P- Z% ^. x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ h; P6 c3 q/ ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. V- T. S: x3 |" f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" e" A2 F  s0 A7 f7 S7 |' ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 W- F4 Q6 r/ P7 P9 V1 [& H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* [6 O% Q% C1 j: O+ ~7 x( w7 R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( |( Y4 _; v) ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 b7 U2 Z, R( `  n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 G% b: \# D3 y6 L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 F/ Q0 i( q) V; f3 V. ?9 x5 C6 H  R8 C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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; S. A& H) S/ z. r% I% v" g# N4 c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>