【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 b# f8 H! ^+ ~6 IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 |7 [! b) ^3 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 ?# b  j; ]2 \; e7 s+ XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# ^8 e: T- h! [# h2 S2 Z% U1 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; T/ M! B* B$ v) E7 }) v$ R' d" NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ Q# {. R7 C* a& q& SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 ^6 J0 ~! Y5 ?+ }/ Z. _  ~) @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 `& t' C$ j# uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 ~% p) u* a! T  c2 eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# x; M, ~' c+ ^3 k0 a4 m8 C  s. N5 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ X" j1 K7 c1 @4 Z& hI regret not dying
" v9 X- T7 s* s$ A* f; {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 d; }* T6 O7 A9 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. a8 {/ ^* }4 c; VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 l- w5 b" v5 o+ s* @" I! m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# t# p) s+ r" F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 U$ m9 V5 i% |8 x7 T4 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% P* m8 E5 C4 m6 ]% F7 Q" ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, O: u* }! {- x0 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, K7 ^, V# t# j1 T* ~# z" N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 v! z2 k- E, a4 E  a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' t: l3 [) |. L: g% b# X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* ]$ I+ e, D, M7 R/ ~! v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 C& ~5 o, U& G- I3 P9 z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 e. b, L+ b1 ~( a% u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 z( l) L/ I& h9 e7 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 O' R& _4 S% r3 }; w3 e, L$ N& r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 t: U4 U2 D) e5 ^  R& l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ t- ?6 T# ~/ `, u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, u, `3 W! u" L9 e  n9 r: X3 s/ X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! q% y4 Z+ \9 p- t" C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 T6 h8 w* i4 a$ O  K; U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 \. h; h0 U2 j3 J7 N7 v. g- s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, V1 v, `9 m* x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. _8 e. }9 Q5 C% P4 b" M: U<P>I regret not dying</P>
( Y3 c8 Z. L  a. ^; y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 g: }' k  n4 U- p' ?0 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
, T' V. l" C, ~7 {$ F9 v% v9 `
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>