【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( P5 N! L+ l) J" x+ A4 z" LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 r+ U  D9 _. w1 v. i8 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. L  Z$ S; m8 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. _; b, i4 I! k% |1 U( EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ G6 g7 ]( z) `1 W, c/ e7 g$ z" C4 qSeeing the sky content with its love
1 u3 k; T/ |6 o. D5 U9 j9 _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 t6 J; ^. u5 \, P! ~2 HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 F1 Y* V8 A" U1 |Every other word you utter is love
# m& B9 w- P" s) g4 c( DI really want to know just how much you love me
# j$ z& ~" \  ]) v: b% J1 z. f, |I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: I0 j( O! X  j1 C" E0 A0 ?( uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 a0 E* s7 p( Q: H3 E" ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 `  t$ g/ O) I6 }6 z( G& QI’m still filled with fear
1 r; X3 R, s* h0 q8 _! OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: z0 d7 |" C  ^) |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. T# d0 u- d  P9 D8 @+ g. ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 f( E8 }+ V2 J0 ]+ D  G+ F4 @% r  C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) }, S  G, s5 T; d$ l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 H. X  W! e" c* ]/ _5 H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- p  x# T2 }( X: Y1 L! j$ [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 z/ p0 t! H. e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! _* Z+ o# O7 }/ i( j! R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 V1 V8 C( G$ e$ U1 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, `, G8 w/ h8 u- X4 Z5 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; d  q# F+ o7 t; A. D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! f  O( t7 `4 n! S$ o; _1 `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 P3 Y1 X/ q- C( l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: X7 W! _* ~) j0 P& l$ ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) z# y7 X. V& m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: D# t4 B1 Z+ l% U( b0 X9 ~) x7 K) @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. X- V6 A- T3 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& e7 i/ Z! k8 V, A: X; r1 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 E2 `6 U+ ?/ g5 P' @: e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- o7 h, h; Y# V+ q% T9 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& ^2 H% @# r. d9 e# T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 ?% J; Q+ W* u6 }( g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ V* ^! A! b' M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 T3 ?2 _3 @( s/ G" J% ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) \) g! A* `; k& A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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8 R  o" {! h2 h0 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>