【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' `. ]) V% z: d* K+ j- t. }) }歌词我附在后面。
! |' j% r$ {0 k: q7 N& VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: Q  r  ]/ t& ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
! ]! |( ~" r2 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) e7 W$ b* N$ j4 y" _The sky is happy down to its soul
; p1 }( b4 G$ \- RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 `1 g0 `, Z! b; W$ `) s8 JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 a. k% Q( v, J8 Q( `Every other word you utter is love
, P3 _7 G+ Z/ m  O: C% }3 YI really want to know just how much you love me
, _3 r3 K3 W. u9 ]0 J7 rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ X* [8 Y/ v4 c6 ]4 _! N  [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, _  _! F+ D: V& ~6 aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 v* t* e' d% W0 G- QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# B3 C0 O+ o$ E, p* q% pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, P# g( \. ]! P" ^7 e0 L! B' Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* w7 i5 Q: A5 i# t0 ~4 b% O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! c* o# D& c: f/ U0 |% B1 s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 i8 l! z9 ]% b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- N. k/ q: ], h8 r1 F) t- f3 b$ x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) c4 Z. J* ?2 i* \% w8 P. L' `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& H9 J) @1 T4 w) Y3 l. f  n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ A! B* ~1 Q( s" F% x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* Y  p, t  L' }2 B6 K3 r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. e2 d- Z- E3 |$ C! G0 n+ k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  ^; s$ L% M) Y0 O8 [: B. C7 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 n  L  Y& j( t/ t3 V* t2 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: h5 K3 K* A3 r8 n0 q& |5 ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 z2 s' k9 l  y2 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" X: ^2 A9 u, J& Y  ^6 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 ?/ b- G4 j. w  F+ L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  s# c5 c7 {6 d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 l0 |6 G! ?- C+ Y  j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' f0 ^7 L/ S+ y8 u9 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# z( v7 k" Y: N& C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ U/ k* Q- N: Y# b& ?( M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" Y; t! w6 S+ G- ?# b  n& M2 J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 V. S3 G# ~- j5 Y6 J* }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% P* f9 t& {5 l5 q7 p4 i3 S6 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* H! y! c; Z4 \4 ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: i( j2 p4 H. n# U<P>I regret not dying</P>
: L; M* Z+ ~$ @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 Y( S$ R8 _1 ?$ |<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 T* {  c4 @  s8 W5 x  |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, b0 ?% ^+ L) Y- H<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. ^8 x4 F; X0 z5 g; D6 t# i2 K# q9 ~' p$ d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  K0 b4 _2 z" T" X4 }: B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' ^# n6 h& U6 X, T! V/ F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! p, Q/ K: t- |( \5 C我请你剖开它
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/ x  |% V, A9 \8 X# g- A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- z5 W5 {; B, s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>