【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& |' C+ d* w% n0 D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% w6 j' t0 b; e2 r' s# v. n, G9 d% AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. g/ Q6 T6 W5 D) g* G1 T, z/ @. uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: l( b% j# z# k) SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 i- B5 `9 n6 T+ @' [/ I( H7 o! rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ |# G# `' ^9 _: \7 oYou needn’t fear anything
1 s0 a+ q# _: ?2 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 s$ k- B# f0 a  G1 M, Y( xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: c7 K! ?' w0 R! e5 UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: c" Z: Q, X. K, I/ `: WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" Y5 H( @2 N, _# M  L( T6 II’m still filled with fear
* \' ~6 l# c7 o( _4 JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ h/ u; B2 M( _; Y" X+ x7 r" ]7 AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  B2 t) h  X$ H% D% ~9 I) A( m& {& qWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 j4 ?7 t1 ~/ S, A/ S- w7 H) C$ |; }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* ^/ ]" C' R: I; `4 kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 o+ z* Z, p* Q' H, e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) |$ V7 O+ \% {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, j# D& o) C9 P0 e# |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 A6 I, [9 g. Y* f8 s$ r( {. M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: J( s8 q: ^8 q+ \; i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) U1 `! V& [+ C; m' M, b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 L0 B. m- s3 D6 I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( R3 O9 L# v0 |/ B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: q: Y" K. P- ?3 i" t/ t4 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ `( H$ ^5 p0 i9 h, h9 ?- V4 B. G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% e; W$ }+ G2 g1 F1 c; M7 ?) Y7 m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ ^2 C* |( O' M6 `6 ^* z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- N9 e1 R) i  h+ o# `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 x; ^9 T2 E7 e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 w& G0 c/ ?) G0 K. X: z' `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 W/ r* B+ a: w9 B0 L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- l/ M3 ?/ \3 i/ m; l& B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# q( @5 t: U; M* [' d& J# @- V<P>I regret not dying</P>
- p  u4 z# _1 v. }; t% B5 G' p& S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% s; o6 Y: Q. q  w: q) j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 c. h8 D; ]. N, c/ S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 _& {; ]; r2 ]' O4 F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, Y" v& M) ~1 ~1 N: ]2 g: @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! P: O: U0 _' l3 b/ m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: @* T* l1 w/ q9 @, b: v4 ^% Y( ^. G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' N2 k8 U# O, w; {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, t0 y) m* ^# j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, v& g3 l, ~& j6 H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>