【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- N' j8 s0 h5 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 K; f6 B1 d1 b# N7 i; o  zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: a  m' d5 \# q* BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) ~( V! B# z) XWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ t: V. Q: t( ^$ I& B' s+ ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ |  J/ h( F' r! p! iEvery other word you utter is love
- l9 a. Q$ f/ _' GI really want to know just how much you love me
. d$ b! }" H$ d* N  b/ {& jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# i/ \' p- q6 \6 a  xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) u! ?8 q9 \6 I+ bI want so much to see inside your heart
( g; v( M2 G: Y7 L' v% Z7 EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. m( H8 V* h! z1 x5 J. eI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 w( A) \0 K0 D4 k% R4 A7 {/ [# AI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ M. E* F1 T4 h8 jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ a) e7 [2 C& u. h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ ~4 D9 t/ g- Z" N! g; a: S) t. L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ ]* C5 l! q% R1 Q8 O: F2 g% ^+ R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" w1 s/ @8 M% {0 I6 \) g$ D7 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% H5 V2 F9 T) A, ?1 \6 }0 o<P>你无需担心</P>
6 V6 w$ _! P, {# G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ q$ L6 X: j# c2 Z  y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ l& v5 E) y4 `- s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ W- {2 D2 V9 F& P2 N6 s; }- |4 c- Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) W/ U; V7 F6 S% S. b& D4 @" x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& J4 _3 N5 o$ @" D" r- x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 L& o  c5 D0 `" O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 |$ V+ e5 |( e7 H/ {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& K. K5 S8 q- ?% u2 k; D7 s) k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 L3 ]' I7 E" m1 R/ G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- s" E; F6 l  F0 W* ~- T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ K! Z$ K0 ]/ j/ _& K<P>I regret not dying</P>
( q# |5 W% E- S* I8 B$ [, U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 ?9 u" G6 S5 M, }! m6 ~' B, |. ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% X6 U* ]; L3 U) \& T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* K0 k3 G" ]& l/ l# {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 k0 r3 i4 |' u! I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 _/ ^* Z$ Z6 ~) o; ]+ N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 l9 W3 w# g& u0 U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>