【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% c/ j4 C, J" |9 H: b5 `歌词我附在后面。
8 G( z' Y2 a6 C# U+ b4 qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- z8 z, l2 Q7 @$ E* QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 U6 q8 A/ _2 b/ K4 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& |9 e1 l: v+ J' f( {. o$ iThe sky is happy down to its soul
& m3 _. B- x( v1 o6 ?" r7 YWith the moon kissing it every night
  T6 Z6 @0 h" `! S: VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 _' {% k8 D9 A( \5 h. AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 z, V+ ~1 d- [) t: QNothing can compare to my love
( w, S3 I4 H8 z+ P! p, h% ~! KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& k6 [8 e" B1 p( AThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 M& s" t- @/ P- c8 {1 a4 w* ]5 dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# O5 E- R! B* uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& J2 {; o% Z) F' L3 y6 HWith such a tongue as yours,
8 G$ ^/ I3 H% W9 M3 \4 V: ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" I, H2 i$ O& A4 Y3 ?# ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 Q1 h" A& T4 u: @# a/ qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 \6 j: k( u( U( e3 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: W: }3 L; |' }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ {5 Z: _) J# E  z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% w9 X* z  _/ `" f: r, j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 k) y: g1 L2 T9 {8 X5 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 Q9 W) X  j+ [1 h1 v' e8 H1 l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% w7 @: e, l$ k% Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 O! |4 {$ t6 E) [' e; f1 f' f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 D* p/ ~2 C# o$ k6 ^0 z) X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 e6 t* k; Q# W% E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 A" `  ?: z& P  T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 g1 K2 Y/ i4 Q8 v3 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ M+ v3 Y( `. l) W. A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ B: n1 M$ E2 x! Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' N- R& G8 C6 {" J# v7 T( Z& l- z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; ~+ v* b- c, F) r4 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 ]( q- Z! x1 D( q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' B3 N" K0 b: N8 i3 N/ ]& {& O% v; {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; h$ _& H  G4 _4 n& s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, X$ i: O  f% y+ T+ D$ [" @& K# g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# y# g( Z+ m2 T7 @  E' U5 o' l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 M7 t9 @3 _6 C5 p9 \! ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 s4 L2 J6 \% Y9 [5 F! D: Q4 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; B2 ^: ?: M. l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>