【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# d9 P9 e2 D' ]0 G$ M- kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, @6 ]. E4 x; q& H( Q  S, w9 S0 P4 nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  _" v2 Z! h, \. ]5 h" }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 M1 ?+ m+ W4 x/ D: j6 L. I7 s* hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! u1 k) k9 ^  i1 ?4 sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- K* ~0 D8 _4 \; e$ u- L$ h3 p8 tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) A  S: k) z1 c- F' F( {0 k& nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( W. F7 c$ L9 w# rI want so much to see inside your heart
& ], J/ l/ K- \4 h3 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" H# k( o: T0 q* [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 s: Z& r& s$ n* m9 x0 a& YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ f( @+ @8 G1 s: x& l( fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 w/ A9 n, B) I$ n% c7 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 R7 L' z# q8 }, v8 f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; V0 K. a3 b* |8 M# y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ S6 w! ~: @+ d" `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) h7 T; P: n3 z" {5 V% K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 S% v. p6 Q, U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 g" p# I1 R% N3 l+ L5 E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 q4 w$ Q1 A9 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" k# r& C# e4 N. ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! [9 B: M! \  [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" A) W$ p5 ^8 G( c4 ]+ z+ z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 a& l) C* b5 _3 }' e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" b/ Y' c# u! x. C7 s" j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 d8 O4 Y, ]* f7 d/ n( }: s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; r' [; q( @" [: A4 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ w* a( o- B. I& ^+ B  y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" N( S7 }. q; `2 ^# J# c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 U0 k/ I* I  A* d3 Q$ I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ L6 G0 P8 e2 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 V# ~6 K4 O+ J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 d5 U) g/ A2 Z, I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. b) Q: t6 O$ b9 s6 r* N<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 N: M1 t$ |0 V& s1 E1 @. _+ w4 I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 [$ A1 Z& G* g/ h' ]8 A" B5 n$ a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ e2 M( m" O' H: C' a2 k& n0 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. w: {7 \4 }& W  c% P6 \7 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  l; q4 G& Y8 R/ I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" g! W1 P( M( i$ I. n5 H& S, O+ a7 }我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>