【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ S" s3 u$ D: {. N: |  J0 jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# |1 Y1 ^3 v# AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 g1 D6 F2 P! T. iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 Z+ u* A' w" W! }% F; H/ IYou needn’t fear anything
; b- D6 M! ?0 o2 W; I1 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ e9 [! {) W0 {* K% kI really want to know just how much you love me
3 A0 Q% t$ c6 aI love you I love you with all my heart
- D. g, i0 W8 C5 m0 ^! j8 C/ N9 PNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( v. q) I9 V2 kI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 C4 u" x0 g! d0 Q% o! t- zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( N. r+ P' ^1 m( _& f' ^0 ~1 {With such a tongue as yours,
) c6 b$ A! V2 u+ Q6 UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* d0 O# V" z- A+ S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 v$ L* l! V# O* ]9 G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 ^' ~4 I" e+ G) V" M4 x& X8 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: _3 B$ o% f5 ], K  N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 V1 b2 T) a; @& Q- h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 J1 |$ u) z5 L9 m# l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. g$ ]4 }7 W+ R' d0 l7 d( m2 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- Q1 q0 O& b6 [- E: N; m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 m8 X" K9 Y' V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; p" T7 ~, e# l! V) ]9 m; U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 s5 `3 O; ]: J9 K7 @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ w( t  f2 P( ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 ^' G2 \$ G) }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 D* l1 s+ T3 _4 T/ T; }# p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- a6 J8 H( a% v2 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( x, H; l: T! n1 n$ t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# p$ x  I3 L4 \, j; P1 r, r- G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- ]6 j, X8 M( x: A, Y3 L/ E6 H# W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; D, |& F2 T: W/ p1 d1 A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 [  b, W' X/ Z: w5 r: j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 ?& m% z6 f  G: k; r/ A' T6 l) ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 q+ C- ~) t* h1 W" Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# e6 f8 y+ M9 M, X, ^$ P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) T0 Y7 U/ _+ X7 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ ]5 ~8 I/ l: z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ `+ g! _; q+ k. _' f! ?& j0 a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' z" Z8 |" g- G1 P3 f' J4 J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>