【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( z: y$ _5 s8 j2 j2 y6 G: E: f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 E( y# t/ C$ @( X, q) kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 U" B7 p# H+ s2 [4 }8 e+ SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ A, A% y& V5 {1 U9 ?" KThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; Y4 S* q+ [  I6 p& lYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ n3 J. e" Q2 |4 h% Q# XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 `# n: J: b) K! s: dI love you I love you with all my heart
/ k& R! N/ c/ v. NNothing can compare to my love
3 c2 p5 M  d; b" i. PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 e6 u' r( k* c) R. zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, x" H8 ]4 l% U+ N3 r" Q' Y+ |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! Y  H9 y2 }3 d3 W$ P+ @( VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 @! ^5 @( U' N' ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; q1 ?7 R) U4 ^6 Z0 K# N* bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* s3 v+ r* C; D% y& E; _3 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' i, R: y& d% L. K3 o; C: s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! y3 w0 W) F, g( }2 K2 ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 h- i! R. e: g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: A5 k0 z) M" G8 i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# @* x- x; D$ ]0 o- S& p$ r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: t4 P- {9 S, J$ n: k. c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% V6 T# s4 J7 l7 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: v1 `9 v& i- o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: M, ]" o' [7 b( n# E- p3 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 a2 z* M4 e5 J7 `. F/ }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; F% V* w. w4 K  |& u7 l: f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; I* F. k4 s! ]4 X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: B4 K' Q$ S/ V8 Y( w5 R; H3 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 \6 F9 n7 e: ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  w- e+ r2 C, T) |- z1 }- ?! T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- z+ h% H$ T) L1 j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ ?& |( a( F! x( G# i8 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  N$ ]% s" E# g" A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# e( T: x# U, o& e. f<P>I regret not dying</P>
' p) K, j( Q; a  R7 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" S9 O  ?2 V9 ~* i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! U2 c" W, ]' A, Q! m* Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ R; B" {3 n1 d3 q+ C) m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" c$ k# |; F2 m' ^& C: r5 y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 C0 s" A$ X) z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% j1 G/ ]- ?$ r6 Z6 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* I7 x; U  I* W3 ?5 b我请你剖开它
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. a: Z3 K) L" j, _- t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! U7 I/ m4 u0 u& b0 k1 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>