【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! i) ]; L, u- }" D" J- z1 i+ t5 W/ IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 P1 r) O  _; B7 z5 t# k3 xWith the moon kissing it every night
8 A" S; X6 F) YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 F; ~' k3 {. N2 r' u- W1 `! y/ SYou needn’t fear anything
  ?- p) w2 F6 [: J5 v: CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- H. k( E7 G4 UI really want to know just how much you love me
1 f9 f$ K9 y1 N) cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" X* }. J9 j: G9 xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( D* r8 A* g4 @4 t# @& ^I’m still filled with fear
+ H3 d3 O' H1 }6 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 ]" l5 P9 Z% y( ^8 VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 S4 Q; r4 _0 W1 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" ~& Z- v# T3 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 Y) t  b) G6 _8 B+ x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! X* _/ o$ U& _% D6 u. j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" W9 y8 [7 Z1 Z. G3 ~7 M* f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ D( k5 z& h6 b' E( l4 F0 q3 w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; w- d. N9 X: K9 o+ X; v$ @3 b0 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 A* E6 }  j! v9 ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 o% z  n2 t' o* O6 H6 X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 b6 _/ J. x* ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 ^1 j: e5 o, o. p  l9 I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ |- D. Z/ ]5 l7 t, l* q- u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: Y) j0 V2 E8 k9 W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) j4 L. d) }" k0 u( T, p% B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) `+ P: Y: w' A5 j7 k- I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" {- e" o5 }& j8 C! y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 p+ a! L1 y( L2 }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 p' _: Z/ q! [+ c+ N9 l4 x9 R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 p+ b* }; G8 R/ c2 l5 G: P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 s9 W, }$ V# Z$ ~* Q/ ]$ k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! [* E# @) g6 I/ _9 q5 e+ ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* M# k" g# m: Y! m4 u( w: |" F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: P2 g! v1 I: T7 a( b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, h2 t; v9 l- e! K- Y( y  D5 g3 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 O, G6 O- N* z5 U8 |; I8 c% g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) |" F8 l0 f* q7 f1 o& v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& e' U8 D! C. m& Y1 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 A5 D* Q$ n% t8 I3 G' @( t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ k/ U6 J# y) z" l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) F2 U/ ]: I7 Q: Z, }( a7 Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>