【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& n. u# h4 `" @9 {4 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% ~5 ~) z" }$ _0 ]9 g/ p  H+ bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 v- ]* j7 i, L, ]* r# s  ~% g& jThe sky is happy down to its soul
" e7 x% m% M3 q! R! b+ B% g7 T; dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. T' {- i. U% y! o. XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& X$ I( i8 L& B- }8 L# f  n; n2 [1 II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& d5 Y1 X+ K0 n+ h" oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 _& Y0 I1 f6 ^' m$ @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ [; |( d) B; }; h/ g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" X3 U4 n; M7 V1 v4 _1 ?9 ~4 Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* ~0 z" n( F! }) y- K, C6 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' F* S# z% `' h' U" F" T3 z( U/ T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* n5 k  b9 s1 p+ Y2 g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ o: x& w! W! V6 d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' [" N0 k( w( }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 g. Y* I& D" o6 |; w4 s8 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ w9 K2 @0 l4 V! D* z) V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" E4 Z: B9 l; i3 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# }5 a. q: d$ e9 E) ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 M3 T0 y) T) D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% E% O2 f: ^, c9 c! v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 \& ~! g8 x; W& F# z2 k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ T, ^/ O  U/ N' F; ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 w7 L3 t! H9 s- q5 V% \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! e9 Z8 k) G6 e3 X# C1 X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* ~1 b$ e; S1 X8 g" ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 R7 u3 v; C' A2 G9 o; K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 a, Y/ J& \8 I8 \# M6 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  [$ _& b& t* m2 E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; E* @5 G/ ^! F* k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% w! Z# y- v; f' B  G9 [* z<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 B) _  S) l# c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ h0 ]3 A7 Q$ C& B/ n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 l2 C  b% Z. M0 P6 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% f/ f  d9 ~) Q' p; t& [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- Q- V% J5 Y* l4 U' s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; X, T, N8 @# ?$ a7 p/ w# w2 I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ H* z& p5 _" S: R  a% c0 o7 D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ b7 P. J0 d% {  I8 u9 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ l8 N6 U+ t, \  F% Y$ _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ L5 \! q) @' `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>