【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) U/ j& y1 F6 \0 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 e2 t# s: n- t) _# d. RSeeing the sky content with its love
) E+ ]+ E# S  `/ C# }1 R9 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% r9 \1 I# n" zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 n$ b# p& F0 W* nEvery other word you utter is love
; I# z! C% K5 B2 gI really want to know just how much you love me
8 D! S$ c% P0 z* L* y: x% Z% |I love you I love you with all my heart
$ h3 z& u% m; Q$ |+ m( `Nothing can compare to my love
* D0 M' R" e) D; G' i4 h. v" C/ WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 w- e6 o5 T. r0 Y6 f1 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
9 P6 r5 O' ~' A( vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 G' Z# m# b, @; r4 o, ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! ?9 x' D7 y) `With such a tongue as yours,
7 w2 G3 m7 ^9 Y- c. ?+ o4 b2 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* v" e7 Y2 C- p& h+ B5 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) ^: a; u& H2 U4 R1 [& v1 x% ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; i5 U) l! S2 {8 ]) \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  k% K/ ^$ A7 G4 a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; w! v6 ?# o9 Q) x  Y$ `! m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; W3 k7 `6 ]" p: q6 l5 `. R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 G  ~5 x# s+ n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: w2 h: S) x$ D( j- }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 }4 k" N& J7 P8 g; a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# h/ e; r5 a  J, g- K5 g, |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 D: p3 r8 d) j' _( w5 p* y+ x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 E4 }4 ~+ b! o$ w- |. B! b  @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  Y* Q$ f/ S  N8 S. K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 \9 ~2 S& ?' e) B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 {0 Q5 o" j* W# V& F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 b7 e4 u) X! `. ~4 I. L* B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; r3 E: `9 f2 b/ c# |0 B8 |/ V+ u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( d: t# {2 t- d& h+ ^: }' T) n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 c# `( R( J# b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 j% K# [- U% j) ^$ f; Y9 U8 @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 [  a+ k3 p9 G) f4 M3 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 a, A# B+ a5 M& Q, f2 F9 Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 ^  A: F7 G8 ^$ R7 _& F/ P$ d8 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) x% N: c1 g! n# K4 E7 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 h* w5 U5 h* k; V3 G. |) S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 J9 g. z  f2 Y/ d4 Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

4 X3 V( q. z4 m" q9 ^8 Q1 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>