【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 H6 w5 O( B8 C$ I' U0 f; S) \$ AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" I$ n& U# U; d! ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( m' _/ R; ]3 i+ l0 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# N( u) ^$ H" j/ j% I: qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ Q. H0 v, i: {; ~, A' h' QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' _. t, g% l8 Y/ eI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- S6 u9 \) Z+ ^4 N" W) ?, O: cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. M, r/ `/ v8 r" l9 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 t7 I! y( N; V% a( ]: t& {( [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% b3 ~: K* D0 g* |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 l4 x/ ~' S: x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" y& u& C% o/ o# b* n, ~) f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, l9 z, r, N# c; U& @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" i' [8 w3 \# P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 e' i  @1 x: B) v0 f- f% K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 P* j: \* Q0 D) i4 y* |) ]1 S" A/ N( d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ F: l5 R' D1 L* ^* B+ z& [( P9 Q5 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" B6 G* G% ~: y  b2 z) b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. r: c/ W' c" P6 n4 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: A, R# Q2 y, c' z<P>你无需担心</P>
% ^- ^5 u" c1 E% T& y; L! I7 e6 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  {, E( K9 f- H9 [6 d0 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 n  _7 C- I9 f% U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 r: _( l0 N, z6 F( m6 z6 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' k7 _7 i0 S, n& W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& P" j+ E  `8 [8 v' w% m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ Y, [1 Y0 N( T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 Z- Y6 h$ S9 B' X3 Q2 A; M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 ?9 s) ~: l" `+ Q  Z1 q3 L9 s9 B! \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. ^$ g8 [- w9 x( D4 z) Q1 [& k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 ~, U% X7 D7 i, ]/ ]& r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* b2 v: O9 \% q0 N. h& J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. l7 g/ r7 L% a) F, K6 f. X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 U$ V9 s& E) i& ?+ ^& {& P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) T3 o8 A* G$ Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 A. L! l# o$ I, t3 {0 l8 G5 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' }; T/ Q  c  a; W5 O4 t6 w; {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& ]; S9 R# t, R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, ^( ?1 F6 h- Y+ T% O+ ~我请你剖开它

5 x1 h& V& h6 p! ~) J$ ^% A$ a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>