【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 w5 @# r- v8 k; y' b3 vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 V. k4 k; D( s; E1 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 Y, J' K3 }# \2 C7 o' S1 rSeeing the sky content with its love
8 ?. K  K& L" V; Q$ W" C7 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ w/ s9 B0 p( ^You needn’t fear anything
+ V* P1 v# X% g2 M. k# D; j" XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' u  d: e$ U/ p, J# ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' r1 L- `" M4 G8 h% Z" ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, D3 O; S8 D9 N: dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ ?3 E1 t+ Q% E( V! aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" Y) p) _1 e& L# @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; t2 u: U' ?- q9 Q+ [1 T5 n5 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 H6 x+ e( g: i. l: u+ Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 k6 ~5 I7 P" q# X6 |9 V, B7 O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 C: s1 i$ T0 a1 K4 D4 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ E+ I# N  U* [' ?, b% x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& G3 W) l: C& J2 B' |* I3 Y% `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 `/ c. e( O4 z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ `6 Y1 b4 K) C: Q- z* }+ {* h& y2 b5 C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 v5 Y5 |, H4 t7 c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 m8 R4 O- F8 g  o. X$ Y. G; Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 v( d& n- ^5 O- t* v' f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) r8 d8 r( `9 X( t0 s4 X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! @& v. s8 W3 v  X" K  V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  P- E% o1 T* a; l/ }4 w/ f: G6 [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ ]. x2 S+ R6 F- g' V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. e; G4 x" ~9 N% Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! w8 m! |3 `4 d) Y5 |: A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" I4 m  o! V0 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 U0 R& s! ?9 Q" ]% S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* q( r+ K2 ~7 n3 f. x  W- E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& q. R" _8 U$ \4 T* s& b5 W9 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 p7 ^+ l1 _) V( I* y* t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>