【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- P. F/ W, d" M- L% v% x6 o3 Y5 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ q. A0 m) m2 n3 B0 F# e3 t* U: TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ }& _' f  B3 D5 T& XWith the moon kissing it every night
4 C. M9 j- l) m9 P& F  t6 [Seeing the sky content with its love
$ O$ v% j8 v4 ^1 H5 [1 j( aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 a( h5 r0 E6 c' N' ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! _$ k$ d# j* w; |7 l/ O1 t' tI really want to know just how much you love me
3 I! D4 M8 X8 P* ZI love you I love you with all my heart
* c# U9 |! e7 ?8 Y$ dNothing can compare to my love
/ @% X+ f; s5 g& @. QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. e+ G8 d1 |- e6 n7 p9 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; Z1 g6 J7 ]" V+ g0 I6 }* B2 VI want so much to see inside your heart
2 h9 f/ R, U9 O) ~& [) a* n" ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. l* S: v/ s4 EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 T$ Q0 Q  v) T3 b) |1 [3 ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 v* _# y  x) i9 K2 i1 Q% @: z0 P8 w7 M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; A: l7 V" X- I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ D! P" w& _0 E& K+ @( A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ E) j0 w% a! ?) Q( Z  o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 v- B7 e+ B+ @. {" Q0 ~! i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. L% v5 G8 c( m' H6 |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. C# Z- }! i) k) X- P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  |& j6 |( K0 a" [' B, t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% F' ]% L. W) Z0 W5 I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! P/ u) h& c: ~" [* \, _: B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ \6 g$ N3 M! v) [' L' f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* a0 ~9 n. A; b* L4 K0 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 U2 u! e/ {* H$ F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" ^7 u' ^. f2 H' {7 C2 \9 W% F7 v% l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- O. E2 m4 O  q1 C6 _# [! N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 t8 ^7 U2 N7 V2 B5 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 q) v$ u9 d3 W6 C; Y2 K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ K2 w+ K; w3 z/ z8 x, j* ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ @7 J5 a4 s3 |+ u3 x8 ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 b. k! q& {9 E- t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ J0 A2 f) V; [8 |; A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; T6 L  h. s/ ~3 b- h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ u* v4 s7 ~7 K. d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- k' B7 h2 r% j: e( _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! E. R- K' [$ n2 m9 j" E) [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 e5 `7 m! ]4 e: k/ f6 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( D1 m2 O; w# w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: i' q& g: c, u- G- \2 x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>