【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# {8 V/ J8 F6 j. [5 mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 `9 |$ k; c+ _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( p" [& k2 j, P" J% ?9 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- _' [& M, m2 \: FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. P6 L; T! C, e2 \& vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* N6 ^) a' X- b' z6 @1 \/ s+ ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 ]* K& X8 l+ t3 P* D; D1 w* n/ WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 [* @. w% i% X9 v9 u1 Q3 T0 v/ f3 SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 _# v8 \% m- B5 n$ [. s" g; i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% k7 y, G& Q; u1 K0 u' V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 }3 @3 ^. e8 I2 T+ D8 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 }) b* f& J- @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 g& d+ [1 ]8 L& h5 Y1 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 c3 s* x' O& q: E% b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ b" T1 X: _' h' \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' V4 ?6 ^' f% w' ]! b5 n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 O+ j; o, e7 |: Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 r1 m  Q+ h7 x. H. ?1 U* w" I( W) n<P>你无需担心</P>
% M7 C: P* o1 I- K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 _3 r- P, h4 Y+ f. F2 n+ s. V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% y6 I, y& {7 K" g( h8 r( k0 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 V$ `/ F2 f; H: y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# `) y$ O3 `$ ]8 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ i' ~5 A, X: H9 {% b3 s( _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# s% p6 k7 m) u7 U9 P5 C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- N' i! j6 \: F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- q4 }9 N: u% y* z8 h( k6 Y; b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% ^7 O' i$ @# \8 k+ r4 w( A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 O( N  w, r9 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# W" u0 f$ a/ O  e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ K- E% P" q; e  l7 @7 P6 H1 m<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; _) I4 u! }1 x; }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" T' `: R9 e. @7 b  ~" t5 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% A3 p' {1 U  M  Y7 I: E+ z/ }4 w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 i9 U( H5 ]1 w; m9 Z- l) t- u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 q/ X' [" ^/ U  m7 G* l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& f  h6 y1 w# f/ H: g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# t8 {/ J2 _' C  v1 m+ }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ d4 ?! m& A3 G1 X5 r$ C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. P/ V( c  Z5 F& M; [) R  v6 x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
* z8 Z1 j0 Q; H0 B6 `% i
0 [  S, E5 J7 L) t5 w1 {& A我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- }9 }4 L  m+ Q1 Y& G3 z  ?1 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>