【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 }3 n% V% s' Q+ t8 q5 A/ uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. U0 ?# l& h4 N: F" zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ S3 N: `1 }: X  @. _0 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# N3 P* ?& H1 J4 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 b4 W) G, s. }' f. _: ], XSeeing the sky content with its love
# o& K2 r. Y3 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 E6 _; W8 G# E( h  w/ S6 v/ AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 ~$ K8 [7 m/ ?* G) M3 ?Every other word you utter is love
) _* K3 C$ @6 l2 E# E. c; X* gI really want to know just how much you love me
; X4 c0 O+ D* ?- A1 y0 fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 c  z5 Y4 |# r: I: w! A" VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ V& N2 T& m/ K8 Y6 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 @3 H  c3 K! M6 y' g3 ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 b5 l2 F6 @. }) pI’m still filled with fear
5 y2 e; }/ p, e0 C8 g( q4 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; c/ D6 H4 f7 M& ]' k) XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 g$ D1 C! C% a, \' l7 r$ g6 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  a+ {+ a9 W4 F) f: ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 ~+ W! z$ e+ {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" x: D- c1 G( i/ v0 Q  P0 k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# V: i! u5 e# k2 s. Z' E1 ]. f8 j, ?0 z+ u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 ?8 Y; G9 s- h" P% z! H5 i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: i" v$ I! \- S8 r: i6 {" P6 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 f* p1 j% p9 ]: A, r! k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) P0 E3 k8 G5 O% a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 w( }5 ]) m7 B! s" _/ x* J" o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. ~' @5 Q( Q. j( n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. Y. a% D" R1 Q* k- ?( Q+ ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  r8 V/ |+ y$ \$ U# e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 R0 Y2 A3 W; }/ G0 N, V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 \+ X9 `3 d( i3 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% l1 K/ s) Q* k  R, B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 o! g4 K; U( I% o) x1 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! |" b! Y* B9 i7 I- e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 D! p4 X7 v2 [" x/ C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' ]5 ?% d8 [/ n1 j/ B, Y$ @/ m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 V$ c5 T4 O: W+ g9 Z) A# {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ t  H4 k; E4 ^. q, V# e8 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 C! {+ v! S  c8 J5 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 {3 D* U. O: O( ]5 f- f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% ]* j" {, i2 z8 ~2 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: W% j' r; L. p0 j  _0 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 f& H" y5 B/ f  E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 @1 H+ e/ Z$ Y9 M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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! E6 A! @# o7 z+ W1 }& h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 ]& P& Q) o) {4 R+ a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>