【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' d, G0 g8 h: G. v5 X  NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: J8 y# U/ e9 {The sky is happy down to its soul
; D+ C( M6 w! `, P/ S9 U8 vWith the moon kissing it every night
1 v$ i. d- k, ]; k  tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 h1 l$ V( ^- F8 W0 eYou needn’t fear anything
% P& @( {3 b, A; S2 Q. S. }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 l" J9 o, q  k( b+ f" x( x% L& KEvery other word you utter is love
0 [9 y( \$ R  ?% eI really want to know just how much you love me
: v1 t! q7 K% {5 W' eI love you I love you with all my heart
. `# o- [( f+ H! q. C3 ANothing can compare to my love
; h- u1 J/ {, wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# \8 O1 d  g' X/ |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ G; t! P* ?" ]6 {' X' b% tI regret not dying
2 L; S4 h: U$ C9 X* x4 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  [3 k9 B1 F# w3 ]7 f, R  \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 L. o) ~- f0 B( F" f1 `3 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 u* ?+ d+ v4 L$ Q3 FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  P( R1 v) [/ u7 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) e, n% X' T9 _2 i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 I6 d$ J, V5 I9 J% |6 |* n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ M6 t- S4 ?  W- L$ ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  a% }  q1 T3 R$ ~9 b8 t8 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, a/ T9 `  l% u" H. P, V% r+ G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: g2 x" U; x" L7 G6 z; C" t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 [1 t! [! `% y$ f! v# G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* \) w2 _# C4 v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' x# O2 T# R$ h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ x! @3 U% _4 @; _& ]6 M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% e) s7 m/ _* T' B/ P) ~: E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 P- \, L% z) r6 S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ j6 E% o3 {0 j: ?. o  }/ \4 o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& k8 P* K( n# f, }% {% M  P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, z1 N9 d4 }+ O! y- X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 l, N. U- b2 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* o& x7 C' Y, Q4 t  ^; E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 z3 z2 a0 S6 a9 x- O, k<P>I regret not dying</P>
! v2 h2 c) `4 |: U6 A+ p% ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. i+ U0 `3 X+ m5 E2 g) P! L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 i( _" {9 i' u# l- J/ t5 F- P: `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 X& ]' S. G2 f% t, V: Q3 U8 [$ @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) g8 d5 m- q9 {2 \3 w& q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 \: n/ H. u7 t  |* ~% F: T! a+ I+ C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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8 ]# ?6 ^8 s" J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 w; B9 B$ y8 h' a5 X4 j+ @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>