【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ g, Q0 c3 h( U, T& @1 Y4 A5 G歌词我附在后面。
7 ^  _$ i9 g# D8 C2 }' m- C: x% q) qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 ?5 e& J. s, A  L' [. l; w/ X' |7 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) Y* K& F: I& k; J- o: i; wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 ?: R$ r$ i& T: Q4 j! O! QWith the moon kissing it every night
0 @) ^* O2 k/ ^- WSeeing the sky content with its love
# f, [' s" [! d6 L2 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; z) K0 f$ a5 @" m/ O6 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 E, Z* l" Z6 bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ E! w. d* q3 N8 i& z" k: KI love you I love you with all my heart
0 K3 @; Z  A/ L3 V8 ~  eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ i# Z$ a9 X( c1 B2 U" ^* |. hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' u  k' @8 `3 j4 U# j" fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 n+ q- X  d9 L, f5 c9 d! GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& W( D. b; |, X$ B' wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ b4 O% C2 s6 Z9 b; g! S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! b% x1 q+ ^8 F8 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 \4 ?# h+ @7 n. K+ x' C% a% x8 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 |/ M( }4 x( q. A+ R9 s1 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 l9 p# E* G( G& T1 O; g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 G$ i1 d3 T/ E6 H$ f. R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& h5 Z5 c- o0 D, A( P+ q9 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% _) V) H' R( j! P+ c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 o& V4 Z, r3 ~0 ?; c5 J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: v+ E$ g  ?! |! l4 c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ }8 T5 m( x, F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- w$ W% m  @$ Z5 N6 W' P# Z" F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# S8 G+ ~! j. \3 o* \6 n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( X, C; ?( y1 A, ^8 @' `0 a+ v  O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& l) ]% v: P, ^( i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ m6 H0 V( ]4 Z) n6 S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* a) ?" J4 d4 G- M) @( E* [( P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" ?- b  S2 F/ k  G' w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! |5 w: I2 j9 J) r5 q- l2 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: I5 Z) g* ]+ X1 e$ n3 g8 D4 d5 a- l4 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 a  S3 Z/ W4 ^) `' z9 X# H' w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 W' {' |( G$ x2 h! @% v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 J! f) z5 r8 u. l0 B: i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; h+ K( M% q+ S+ h& X" @; q: e* S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. M( q  \0 |. n& _) A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( S3 ^; o4 r# n3 A6 N% ^9 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. N) y% z; r/ x1 P; O! t4 F' [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 j& m2 [$ A  |  {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# z/ v7 g) F- V+ o7 q  v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# l2 c, t: |/ \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& v+ y/ [7 m9 p" W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ Q. E. n3 q+ g; P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! C9 A& O( r5 R  t我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, Z; ?4 s- [3 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>