【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 z3 Y0 B: ^) x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  R; O3 J7 c4 V& QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 C, P5 a+ i  O# C% EThe sky is happy down to its soul
, I* f# i7 X% j4 _0 i. x" GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* {3 G' t- A1 `& AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' z# q" u4 k' LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 s9 S/ B+ v; X+ P% B3 kI really want to know just how much you love me
( X7 Q, }' r6 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
: x% U% }$ ?: @. ], gNothing can compare to my love
- b- f5 M  L. @5 l( m' m4 C8 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ h" e- ], a; V7 p2 `+ M# C- L* dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 V5 I0 F2 y* U2 P, E" {- e& qI’m still filled with fear
) s5 a  }, V8 q" PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; u' }/ ?% a7 e( w% t$ {% EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( w" |+ J' ^2 v4 `  F+ qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' m. r. n: y  W1 N( c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 n8 y8 J* c- k$ g- U: u: N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: i6 r) e* {1 g$ Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 z$ I1 d" G  w. Z  c9 z% i8 r6 ^" K$ ?" }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. G  g2 w. b) `/ Y2 Z5 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 b6 ]5 \* \+ `; y! M0 _# Q7 m, s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  Q, r( b: e$ S# O: w" f+ e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( K5 j; [0 R+ }$ Y6 ?& a* \) Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 V: f+ l% @1 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 m! A' ?' _6 U. T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% J5 B; A# |. G; w, v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 d2 _8 G" [/ Y9 `; P! ?3 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 Y" O& q6 u, _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) h+ N+ u# ?0 ^7 W0 t0 b: _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 h1 L2 O3 A9 i7 c- L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ D8 G5 `, J3 L, C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- J& m$ y' I- i/ E8 z6 a- \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 @3 u" n$ y4 D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 o  w) q, r& ~: N  g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ a  [! O, k' F( d9 _3 h/ |4 A8 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 i% i5 N$ t3 I2 C% F- U& [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, v, D" m3 E' v' p" a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! u$ V; V/ P# i2 p4 Y3 A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) L, c9 Z% l8 E8 ?' A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) q1 n8 E/ z" ?  K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ X. {/ p' I7 o我请你剖开它
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% n0 Z) F7 w; o/ D; e- M0 U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>