【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
& }" M/ h" m; k+ z; l& X! I袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

1 k, E9 {/ T& F/ N- h! }5 iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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2 `+ }" s( W' V5 j& Q# f我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  

( M8 }- z( [1 ]  g$ @% E, X7 jFrom the first moment we met,
5 ~5 u2 m/ h( t) cI already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
: `# z0 A. v- l! w& J你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

We meet and talk everyday,
! F" o  k" i6 Q6 a3 Z7 a2 ~' u6 HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
- j0 S# d: M$ V5 Q/ {8 I我也許就能了解
/ r6 E4 _7 M/ @) O. @$ {4 b/ e# I你的心情
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$ S6 O  E3 v8 \/ E, sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
! k/ g. M1 M+ z6 F1 v1 Z6 c; z為什麼
如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
: N: ?: L  T1 }, K/ I( wBut I never did

愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

/ t! {/ a3 c) i" \; zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
* W( n) x/ F  G4 r: ]+ \* [0 D2 U你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
$ ?' x/ x1 L0 a2 E  c0 O, g; F* }9 _3 _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
* j5 }) f8 _( _- B2 I6 C$ A讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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4 J' n( ]/ ^4 j+ |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 w6 d  \3 }9 K+ R$ d可否讓我托付給你?
& ^8 c' A0 h* C7 h3 y/ f/ c托付我的愛
, E  i, Q3 q; w' Z  s收在你心裡
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0 l$ K( {- O& W2 ~. sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

; n  w; [" K! d+ i) |, @  |4 r愛  簡單一句愛
4 A! u# U  A+ @4 c" r( l, T: e7 z為什麼如此難以表白?

- k( W5 t6 K. R) iI want to confess that I love you,
5 u1 |) }0 R0 l3 {7 NBut I never did

$ O( ?, o. l2 J" ]愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

" K; K' J, C* i7 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

; @6 l: C9 C4 q  B# l! @' X/ B也許有一天
7 L7 V4 U( \, _" k$ C3 I3 j你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
1 r9 O$ C  P4 s讓我向你表白
" j! b9 a/ L; e- @" e/ a- N% }7 I我心底的秘密

0 N8 i, y$ P! tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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* C* b% n. i! L5 c* [! F不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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) q  t7 k, a. a  H7 TCan I entrust it to you?
+ i8 K( C2 k- C& z) F  ^, KEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
- d. i. W% c2 }+ @1 }收在你心裡
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. q, k( p0 C( H" p+ @+ n4 kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
/ Q( v) K& E6 P托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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对唱曲参赛译稿
2 o/ ]( r4 Z9 R9 b- ]$ I# g3 ]# o: A$ q
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 l: F" l2 O/ o# G5 k% ~' ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& X" j$ s' S7 Z8 l9 }* O7 ]! P3 YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

1 k' i) x3 a0 _5 e$ G: Q$ [皎潔月光下
' C2 N" ]3 k8 u" Z天空金銀閃爍
9 v2 b$ P, V8 g0 J4 Z& S+ w# U凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) n8 X! R3 g7 ]" u4 U+ \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 Y/ P7 F" h' x. E0 Q! a7 D, L* tSeeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
7 w$ O1 Y7 ?$ @3 n- x* g月夜陪著我一起沉醉
! k- Q/ N- P; ~, v0 L. @月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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7 `6 I* d- H7 a8 r8 s3 EIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

+ P" n$ j* f9 E$ C- o+ t我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
3 t1 ~. ?2 U5 s  `0 `終將逝去

  |5 V- f. z( S6 fYou needn’t fear anything
8 {0 a1 @; `+ @) `; e. V& q: AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
, H. _% T. A% i- {4 N我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
! w& [8 _# \, i7 z$ {堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
. U; ~2 ^3 F2 P) B4 [( M7 BI really want to know just how much you love me

( T+ O7 P0 m( Z( _你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

7 F2 t& g' _: H) N2 F5 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

6 C/ P& p' C( @6 e" G0 l7 v/ `, MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 g3 K/ i; T' W% ~5 U' E1 q. L整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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, V! |8 }% S( a+ oI want so much to see inside your heart

4 o2 d2 Q+ h5 ]0 t我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

. a9 ^. J( R8 u我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
$ d# W+ h( h' p3 X3 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

9 ?+ F% i' o8 d我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
7 k7 U( `: f/ u+ ?& X8 JIt’s nothing close to 100,000

" \6 a& D7 d; x6 ?可惜我未能以死證明
# l; g" Y3 U, _7 T' {0 G9 J我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
. g" z! B7 z4 p. l8 vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
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2 D0 J9 m: s) r, z# [. M4 D3 d& u* t這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

) @8 d+ ?0 h# b) [& `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
9 ^! |* v4 h" _+ g4 d5 ]( G我將對你訴說
3 i, s( O! r0 Q5 n, E; b千萬個心思

. M, k: l' w4 a6 mRambling on about a thousand words of love
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% e3 M0 j' m" S" s" w愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
5 S0 R6 q0 w# U& g; Q7 |( R6 V- W5 b* Pxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒