【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
. [# C- _+ r# G1 K- `. H2 i/ Nxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

8 l, a6 z$ R8 q- @7 J" J4 B- D6 k一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

) a' i& T# ]7 X4 Q& f1 {3 x2 \' ^# ~6 Z! C再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
* ]) D; Z# L) ?1 ^
The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

9 Y" A. t$ @7 S+ J2 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
# b. \9 E3 e4 U0 n7 R5 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# U( H9 @( w7 k5 }2 x' k月光闪烁 在我眼中
; z+ h( C' p/ z, L# s/ {1 A. kThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 `/ B* Z# U$ _5 v1 l9 _0 \一片丹心 照耀夜空
( J, J( m" Y: R& @0 s1 Y/ T* H
' N& K& S# ~! d) Q# jWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 j# ?3 J+ N! X3 s/ j7 y8 D夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
& A+ O1 a( b2 C5 y# V. _/ y我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
1 i2 K% T5 ^6 N, A/ {/ hYou needn’t fear anything
4 T* L3 d3 ^# K, d7 t- G6 Y+ s怕这怕那 又是何苦
" U  }' S3 v# Y7 i& K) wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
$ [$ j* q6 i; \% d4 w0 I2 \+ DEvery other word you utter is love
/ V8 J/ v& q7 m* F口口声声 说你爱我
4 r8 Q; Q$ l" E2 }& D% h  Y# K; NI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
" e: T7 ]. d. z$ Z+ TI love you I love you with all my heart
5 S6 c: z* M2 v% z, `9 U. |2 b! i爱你爱你 全心全意
+ G5 e1 }0 G( V6 {8 k7 {$ dNothing can compare to my love
: Y( D6 s* `* Y世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; u, N( [% M0 W7 r7 S! ^- T. a/ T能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
& X3 w6 O& V% Z5 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
1 w5 m" S# Z& H! `I’m still filled with fear
4 v2 O9 F: I- U可我依然满心忧虑
' \; g: w$ u; [* n2 f- I/ k5 \, a; gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
& I  D. }7 j- f' ^" C& JI regret not dying
( R& \! ?' D( N2 I: j$ |真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 S, c' V7 t. W/ Z+ I/ e5 O也恨不得  多如千万
: |( G+ r) S; e0 jWith such a tongue as yours,
. W9 L/ C  z! }0 T" ?. P7 M你这张嘴 真真厉害
" o, I7 z1 T# Q  H" HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* y* f& k- q6 [8 l5 ?& ]* p$ B5 n能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" x# ^; ~3 \9 B8 S7 U若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
3 u' o/ v5 ^! i1 O7 W. A4 JRambling on about a thousand words of love
; A+ M( r. [) K5 N% c. T% `! K向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
* m; T0 x% @  F4 p: J
+ j0 r" L9 N5 n# o4 _+ uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
; @' Z) @9 h) [3 m8 _& l. vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; V  {: F* V: j3 i爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
7 t. k" w2 u1 Q! cFrom the first moment we met,
, s1 _! R* L3 V. e! e* X9 j对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
: y7 R' B: a  Q* l2 R& ]" ^0 ~从此别无他意
' {. F; o/ ~/ N0 B1 cWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
* S0 ^/ y/ Q' n7 |  {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( S6 K- X& ?& l/ ?  [% a若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
* X; g8 q0 r- S# ?  ?Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
9 @. X* N/ I% ~) c, v, ?& HWhy is it so difficult to express?
- _) h3 b( q3 Z% G7 R为何如此难言？
, L# T6 v: v! {; J* bI want to confess that I love you,
9 G6 o, q$ l* P/ w$ {我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
, q, P+ d3 E9 [$ y+ G0 bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
3 L6 {3 h4 B* G; V/ ?( t( rIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
9 V0 O5 G7 K1 Q- sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 E, \" A( l- |不愿这份爱 逝如流水
$ t8 F( {5 w8 }Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
- K& P9 R* {% N/ R# Z% |/ HBut I never did
* Q2 w" A9 l& m6 {0 M& H! S却始终未曾出口
' s  h  ?8 `% d6 S" K0 HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
8 ^; x/ @: j) @2 h$ R* RIf today isn’t too late,
6 R# H. T8 k: }5 a假如还不太迟
: K, v/ s9 s% F: w3 ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
3 D9 r5 i# |; _2 J$ ?& `# U, l, wCan I entrust it to you?
2 Q0 @. q2 i& U- q( ~; A可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
8 N# Y+ L; F' h3 W! n+ @从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

3 G0 b7 Z; ~8 c: d4 H$ u0 Q1 U% ECan I entrust it to you?
2 R8 n& V6 Y% J) i' a% s( X可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
  q7 b. Z+ T, u% T; g) ?老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
3 h6 ^5 T- x8 t( Y$ d4 u. u刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。